Current Events > I have an idea for a new Fantasy series called 'The Galaxy Knight Chronicles'.

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Basically this evil being known as Galvanax,can't decide on a race yet. But he is an evil wizard that goes from galaxy to galaxy devouring all light energy from the galaxy. His nickname is dubbed 'The Reaper of Galaxies'. He turns the light energy into pure magic he absorbs. His ultimate goal is to collect enough light energy so that he could potentially become an immortal GOD. In order to collect the light energy he places himself in the center of the Galaxy and absorbs the light from the inside out. The Black hole in the center acts as a shield for himself, And he has his own shield that protects him from the blackhole. Galvanax enemy and the only one in the entire universe that would eventually have the power to stop him is The Galaxy Knight' The Protector of Galaxies. His power is the control/Manipulate of 7 elements. Earth,AIr,Water,Fire,Light,Dark,Metal. Once he is able to combine all elements he will become the Galaxy Knight. The Aura of Stars will have the ability to let him fly through space and fight Galvanax in the black hole. 7 pillars will be scattered across the United States that has the power of a specific element inside. And only the true of heart Galaxy Knight can absorb that element. That's all I got so far. Whatcha think CE?

This sounds like the plot to legacy of kain

Tyranthraxus posted...

This sounds like the plot to legacy of kain

Damn really?

Scenario = change in setting
Story = change in character

This is a scenario

the following novel has a similar plot
https://drive.google.com/file/d/10_cFJBGBzc3omomH9XwTb-Cg9-C7qqzc/view

however, it is a long novel, and you won't read it in a single session. The novel is part of a German anthology titled, "Zauberer and Dunkle Gotte," which translates to "Black Mages and Dark Gods." All of the stories in the anthology are about black mages that are trying to ascend to godhood

there is a German series of horror novellas named "Professor Zamorra" that often features the same theme

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_NeverEnding_Story_(film)

Why are these pillars in the USA of all places?

lilORANG posted...

Why are these pillars in the USA of all places?

theres only two places on earth. USA, and places that dont matter

Rika_Furude posted...

theres only two places on earth. USA, and places that dont matter

Ok. Why are they all on earth in a setting that spans the galaxy?

"So it's like a whole galactic thing?"

"Contained almost entirely inside Des Moines, Iowa, yes."

lilORANG posted...

Why are these pillars in the USA of all places?

The Goddess Solaris placed them there. She is The creator of the Galaxy Knight. She is the Goddess of light. Her brother Gorath is the GOD of Darkness. They are at war with each other. Galvanax is Goraths Galaxy reaper. And Gorax is Glavanaxs right hand man.

DuranOfForcena posted...

but why did she place them all in the USA

Because the hero is from the u.s and he must prove himself worthy to become the Galaxy Knight.

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Cuz the USA fucking rocks ass duh

Tyranthraxus posted...

This sounds like the plot to legacy of kain

Downside to trying to be original in this day and age is that there are so many ways to tell and publish stories thats its almost impossible to create something unique due to an oversaturated market.

You could probably finagle a justification for the United States thing. Maybe the elemental pillars are fragments of a larger, meteor-sized artifact that shattered into the pillars when it collided with earth millions of years ago.

Also, having a main antagonist who's just chilling in the middle of the galaxy the entire time while the hero does his hero thing is pretty boring imo. You should work in some other antagonist factions/forces. Maybe a faction working for Galvanax's interests, other factions that want the pillars for themselves or already control them, and maybe a rival hero who is trying to become the Galaxy Knight.

Kim_Seong-a posted...

You could probably finagle a justification for the United States thing. Maybe the elemental pillars are fragments of a larger, meteor-sized artifact that shattered into the pillars when it collided with earth millions of years ago.

Also, having a main antagonist who's just chilling in the middle of the galaxy the entire time while the hero does his hero thing is pretty boring imo. You should work in some other antagonist factions/forces. Maybe a faction working for Galvanax's interests, other factions that want the pillars for themselves or already control them, and maybe a rival hero who is trying to become the Galaxy Knight.

Good advice buddy. Galvanax has a second in command named Gorax who has a base on the moon. And sends his minions to earth to fight the Galaxy Knight.

CosmicShadows posted...

Good advice buddy. Galvanax has a second in command named Gorax who has a base on the moon. And sends his minions to earth to fight the Galaxy Knight.

And suddenly its an episode of the Power Rangers.

FlyEaglesFly24 posted...

And suddenly its an episode of the Power Rangers.

Damnit scratch that idea then.

Galaxy ranger needs at least 3 other allies. The girl who does the intel and speaks on the radio, and the other guy and girl who work with him in the field. Except at the end of season 2 or 3 the dude needs to betray Galaxy ranger and they need to have a fight to the death. But if its before the season 2 finale its too soon. Bonus points if they are brothers or something