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Scapegoated
06/19/22 3:03:26 AM
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Aliens build one around our sun and transplant humanity to it's inner surface. They do so in a haphazard way though separating family, friends and loved ones. The main characters would be twins trying to find one another in a very hostile environment where everything is developing strange mutant / magical powers.

Do you think this would make a worthwhile story?

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Zikten
06/19/22 3:08:48 AM
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Yeah maybe. I'd read it probably. If it was a movie, I would watch that

Why did the aliens need to move humanity though?
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Chadwick69
06/19/22 3:09:15 AM
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Why would the aliens put humans in the dyson sphere?

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Scapegoated
06/19/22 3:10:33 AM
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I haven't decided that yet. Maybe there's a greater power that let's them make the sphere but they have to do the bare minimum to make sure native species survive or thrive

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cjsdowg
06/19/22 3:12:16 AM
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Why are people getting powers.

Also sounds neat.

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Poorly
06/19/22 3:12:46 AM
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cjsdowg posted...
Why are people getting powers.

Also sounds neat.
Speed force thing

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Xethuminra
06/19/22 3:12:57 AM
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One With The Sun
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Chadwick69
06/19/22 3:14:41 AM
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Scapegoated posted...
I haven't decided that yet. Maybe there's a greater power that let's them make the sphere but they have to do the bare minimum to make sure native species survive or thrive
How about they use the humans as slave labor to make them maintain the dyson sphere?

AND while the humans are being used as slave labor, the aliens are pillaging earth for all its resources.

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Poorly
06/19/22 3:19:15 AM
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Chadwick69 posted...
How about they use the humans as slave labor to make them maintain the dyson sphere?

AND while the humans are being used as slave labor, the aliens are pillaging earth for all its resources.
Alien should be portray as kind benevolent being bent on solving the the problem on earth by wiping all humanity by spreading deadly contagion that only affect humans

@bloodmoon

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Scapegoated
06/19/22 3:40:18 PM
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up

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Robot2600
06/21/22 6:25:10 PM
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Ringworld is the book you want to read. it goes into detail about a Dyson-Ring.

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mustachedmystic
06/21/22 6:36:37 PM
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Chadwick69 posted...
How about they use the humans as slave labor to make them maintain the dyson sphere?
So, they can build a Dyson sphere, but not robots?

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Poorly
06/24/22 7:05:57 AM
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mustachedmystic posted...
So, they can build a Dyson sphere, but not robots?
Robot can rust also they fear the rise of ai would lead to a greater rebellion. Human are just flesh and born.

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kelemvor
06/24/22 8:16:35 AM
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I love that Dyson Sphere TNG episode. I wish the writers would of did more with it or had another episode where they explored the interior. Instead, we get an episode all about Scotty (which is still awesome) with the Dyson Sphere being a small part of the story.
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Tyranthraxus
06/24/22 8:33:15 AM
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Scapegoated posted...
Aliens build one around our sun and transplant humanity to it's inner surface. They do so in a haphazard way though separating family, friends and loved ones. The main characters would be twins trying to find one another in a very hostile environment where everything is developing strange mutant / magical powers.

Do you think this would make a worthwhile story?
While it sounds interesting, you need to keep in mind how mind bogglingly vast a Dyson sphere really is. Using standard earth transportation we have today you wouldn't even be able to explore 1% so the aliens should also leave some neat travel gadgets & long range range communications behind.

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RetroGamer68
06/24/22 8:40:00 AM
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mustachedmystic posted...
So, they can build a Dyson sphere, but not robots?
What if the Dyson Sphere generates Dyson waves that:
A: slowly destroys unshielded electrical components, and it is too costly to shield a single robot, and even more a construction force of them.
B: slowly mutate human genes which can result in cancer and/or superpowers.

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The_Creep_2020
06/24/22 8:41:50 AM
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mustachedmystic posted...
So, they can build a Dyson sphere, but not robots?
Robots are expensive. Humans grow themselves, if you throw them enough and alcohol.

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MrResetti
06/24/22 8:42:53 AM
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A Dyson swarm seems like a better option

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