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FF_Redux
10/26/21 3:29:37 PM
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https://voca.ro/17Z7yPz78d9g

Wanted to have a bridge or something but added instead an ending, went really high up on my voice and I can barely do it but I like it.

new part is at 2:22, I do verse and chorus twice then then that part.

As usual, beginner singer, guitar player, continuing to work and tweak it and words are gibberish.

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FF_Redux
10/26/21 4:21:54 PM
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Giant_Aspirin
10/26/21 4:32:11 PM
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pretty solid. definitely better guitar playing than i can do.

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Big_Nabendu
10/26/21 4:33:40 PM
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wat si that?
A D chord followed by a minor chord back into into a 7th chord?

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FF_Redux
10/26/21 4:38:31 PM
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Big_Nabendu posted...
wat si that?
A D chord followed by a minor chord back into into a 7th chord?

Um I have capo on 3 and use D, Em, A7, G

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Xethuminra
10/26/21 4:38:53 PM
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FF_Redux
10/26/21 4:39:49 PM
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Giant_Aspirin posted...
pretty solid. definitely better guitar playing than i can do.

Thanks, Im slowly getting better, but can still only strum and trying to learn new patterns, cant play single notes or any classic guitar, also hard time switching to bar chords quick enough yet.

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Big_Nabendu
10/26/21 4:42:03 PM
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FF_Redux posted...
Um I have capo on 3 and use D, Em, A7, G
So I was right. Sounds great btw

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FF_Redux
10/26/21 4:45:54 PM
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Big_Nabendu posted...
So I was right. Sounds great btw

Thanks, I played with these chords cuz its the same chords but no capo with Jamaica Farewell by Harry Bellafonte, just different order in verses, chorus etc.

I like making my own melodies and get inspired by other melodies etc. Got several wip melodies. Most are in minor.

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Big_Nabendu
10/26/21 4:49:10 PM
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it almost sounds like here comes the sun

Great chord progression is
A Dm G Cmaj7 F Bb E back to A
But u could slap some alt chords in between.
A Dm /dm7 g/g7 etc

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FF_Redux
10/26/21 5:01:40 PM
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Big_Nabendu posted...
it almost sounds like here comes the sun

Great chord progression is
A Dm G Cmaj7 F Bb E back to A
But u could slap some alt chords in between.
A Dm /dm7 g/g7 etc

Ill check that out, just that several of those chords I dont play so gotta learn and get to muscle memory, try to avoid bar chords so I do the easy F for example.

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FF_Redux
10/26/21 5:02:25 PM
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FF_Redux posted...
nd get in


lol a goat emoji slipped in cuz get means goat in Swedish xD

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FF_Redux
10/26/21 6:33:00 PM
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