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Doe 02/27/20 1:02:41 AM #1: |
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We dont have to go today, Gordon said, its not a big deal. B We dont have to go today, Gordon said, its not a big deal. Thomas turned his head and locked eyes with him. My question boils down to this: When an action beat is indicating that a different character is about to speak, should the action beat be included in the same paragraph as the most recent dialogue, or get its own paragraph? --- This signature won't be changed until at least one out of Astrograph Sorcerer, Double-Iris Magician, Performapal Monkeyboard or Electrumite is unbanned. 2/15/20 ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Sphyx 02/27/20 1:32:16 AM #2: |
The second one seems really off.
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