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Doe 02/27/20 1:02:41 AM #1:	PossibilityA We dont have to go today, Gordon said, its not a big deal. Thomas turned his head and locked eyes with him. It is a big deal. Its the most important part of the day. B We dont have to go today, Gordon said, its not a big deal. Thomas turned his head and locked eyes with him. It is a big deal. Its the most important part of the day. My question boils down to this: When an action beat is indicating that a different character is about to speak, should the action beat be included in the same paragraph as the most recent dialogue, or get its own paragraph? --- This signature won't be changed until at least one out of Astrograph Sorcerer, Double-Iris Magician, Performapal Monkeyboard or Electrumite is unbanned. 2/15/20 <cite>Doe posted [p:934933502] in What's the... [t:78434620]...</cite> <quote>PossibilityA <quote> We dont have to go today, Gordon said, its not a big deal. Thomas turned his head and locked eyes with him. It is a big deal. Its the most important part of the day.</quote> B <quote>We dont have to go today, Gordon said, its not a big deal. Thomas turned his head and locked eyes with him. It is a big deal. Its the most important part of the day.</quote> My question boils down to this: When an action beat is indicating that a different character is about to speak, should the action beat be included in the same paragraph as the most recent dialogue, or get its own paragraph? </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Sphyx 02/27/20 1:32:16 AM #2:	The second one seems really off. --- You're so vain, You probably think this sig is about you. <cite>Sphyx posted [p:934934256] in What's the... [t:78434620]...</cite> <quote>The second one seems really off. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
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