Current Events > Lmao did Goggalor close his pretentious writing topic after his own was posted

Topic List	Page List: 1 ... 6, 7, 8, 9, 10
Konflikt 05/16/18 10:24:06 AM #454:	Yes I did --- You haven't set a signature for the message boards yet <cite>Konflikt posted [p:901436230] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>Yes I did</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
LightningAce11 05/16/18 11:30:47 PM #455:	How do you write a realistically super intelligent character, someone like Tony Stark with all the jargon and knowledge and make it interesting? --- "I'm an atheist too but still believe in hell. That's where you're headed pal." - Mr_Karate_II <cite>LightningAce11 posted [p:901477190] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>How do you write a realistically super intelligent character, someone like Tony Stark with all the jargon and knowledge and make it interesting?</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
LinksLiege 05/17/18 12:05:34 AM #456:	LightningAce11 posted... How do you write a realistically super intelligent character, someone like Tony Stark with all the jargon and knowledge and make it interesting? If it were me, what I'd do is somehow focus their intellect in a way that it leaves flaws in other aspects of their life. Perhaps their intelligence is very specialized, and there are other areas of knowledge about which they're completely ignorant; or their intelligence comes at the cost of some sort of mental/physical problems. --- This is LinksLiege's signature. It is fantastic. <cite>LinksLiege posted [p:901478641] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>LightningAce11 posted...</cite> <quote>How do you write a realistically super intelligent character, someone like Tony Stark with all the jargon and knowledge and make it interesting?</quote> If it were me, what I'd do is somehow focus their intellect in a way that it leaves flaws in other aspects of their life. Perhaps their intelligence is very specialized, and there are other areas of knowledge about which they're completely ignorant; or their intelligence comes at the cost of some sort of mental/physical problems.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
LightningAce11 05/17/18 12:12:23 AM #457:	I meant more in how they portray their intelligence, in a way that doesn't seem like the writer hasn't just browsed wikipedia and thesaurus.com. --- "I'm an atheist too but still believe in hell. That's where you're headed pal." - Mr_Karate_II <cite>LightningAce11 posted [p:901478959] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>I meant more in how they portray their intelligence, in a way that doesn't seem like the writer hasn't just browsed wikipedia and thesaurus.com.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
LinksLiege 05/17/18 12:50:02 AM #458:	Oh. Well - maybe it's just me but "interesting" didn't really convey that to me. I guess it'd be a matter of "show, don't tell." Describe them doing things which show that they know a lot about something - maybe it's a complex thing only an expert can do, or a more simple thing done with finesse. As far as not sounding like the writer just glanced at a wiki page...iunno, you might just need to do some actual research. Enough to describe those actions and the results, at least. Not really stuff I've needed to consider for my own writing, but that's the best idea that comes to mind. --- This is LinksLiege's signature. It is fantastic. <cite>LinksLiege posted [p:901480411] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>Oh. Well - maybe it's just me but "interesting" didn't really convey that to me. I guess it'd be a matter of "show, don't tell." Describe them doing things which show that they know a lot about something - maybe it's a complex thing only an expert can do, or a more simple thing done with finesse. As far as not sounding like the writer just glanced at a wiki page...iunno, you might just need to do some actual research. Enough to describe those actions and the results, at least. Not really stuff I've needed to consider for my own writing, but that's the best idea that comes to mind.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Zero_Destroyer 05/17/18 5:38:49 AM #459:	random excerpt from my novel to further explain what i mean about prose Brian mulled over the idea before storing it away with the vast collection of concerns in his mind. Nodding, he took his suit jacket and placed it over his red T-shirt, foregoing the dress code. If the situation was as urgent as it sounded, nobody would care about a tie. For a moment, out of the corner of his eye, he caught sight of a painting one of the few in the house that Sherry hadnt made herself. It was a simple painting of a snowy, dark looking forest with an orange light in the distance. Why am I thinking of that night? Every day, hed look behind his shoulder, but nothing ever came for him. There were no dark, lurking shadows seeking blood. Crash had all but vanished ever since that bloody night, with the report on the deaths of Senator Dominic Sutherland and his wife being the last trace of The Black Capes influence. this is kind of lengthy for a guy expressing his thoughts very early on in the book; I fail to see how purple prosing this would make it better. It conveys ideas, has a few embellishment words for emphasis (e.g. "bloody night", "vast collection"), and makes the point about the perspective character being paranoid/anxious I'm not calling the above passage perfect but I can't imagine approaching what I've written with weighty prose that just slogs everything down. My novel's entire purpose is to build multiple plotlines and have each of them ignite in really catastrophic ways, and a lot of time is spent in that setup. A lot of writers do that. Why would a writer doing that make the build-up process even slower by throwing adjectives in at every given turn while simultaneously damaging the impact of their conclusions by having those also be defused with cool words I found in a dictionary? --- Enjoy movies and television? Check out my blog! I do reviews and analyses. http://fictionrantreview.wordpress.com/ (The Force Awakens spoiler review up!) <cite>Zero_Destroyer posted [p:901486854] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>random excerpt from my novel to further explain what i mean about prose <quote>Brian mulled over the idea before storing it away with the vast collection of concerns in his mind. Nodding, he took his suit jacket and placed it over his red T-shirt, foregoing the dress code. If the situation was as urgent as it sounded, nobody would care about a tie. For a moment, out of the corner of his eye, he caught sight of a painting one of the few in the house that Sherry hadnt made herself. It was a simple painting of a snowy, dark looking forest with an orange light in the distance. Why am I thinking of that night? Every day, hed look behind his shoulder, but nothing ever came for him. There were no dark, lurking shadows seeking blood. Crash had all but vanished ever since that bloody night, with the report on the deaths of Senator Dominic Sutherland and his wife being the last trace of The Black Capes influence. </quote> this is kind of lengthy for a guy expressing his thoughts very early on in the book; I fail to see how purple prosing this would make it better. It conveys ideas, has a few embellishment words for emphasis (e.g. "bloody night", "vast collection"), and makes the point about the perspective character being paranoid/anxious I'm not calling the above passage perfect but I can't imagine approaching what I've written with weighty prose that just slogs everything down. My novel's entire purpose is to build multiple plotlines and have each of them ignite in really catastrophic ways, and a lot of time is spent in that setup. A lot of writers do that. Why would a writer doing that make the build-up process even slower by throwing adjectives in at every given turn while simultaneously damaging the impact of their conclusions by having those also be defused with cool words I found in a dictionary?</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
#460	Post #460 was unavailable or deleted.
LinksLiege 05/17/18 12:39:43 PM #461:	I'll agree that passage doesn't really need to be purple'd up to be better, but the first paragraph also states that things are urgent - the character has a clear agenda they need to tend to, so he isn't gonna spend time dawdling. Why would a writer doing that make the build-up process even slower by throwing adjectives in at every given turn while simultaneously damaging the impact of their conclusions by having those also be defused with cool words I found in a dictionary? Going purple sparingly wouldn't severely damage the pacing. Certainly not telling you how to write your story, but this part of your post makes it sound like you think purple prose has to be an all-or-nothing deal. (EDIT: I hope I don't have to point out that I'm not talking about small instances of gogg-tier purple prose. Just, y'know - jazzing the descriptions up a bit.) --- This is LinksLiege's signature. It is fantastic. <cite>LinksLiege posted [p:901501253] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>I'll agree that passage doesn't really need to be purple'd up to be better, but the first paragraph also states that things are urgent - the character has a clear agenda they need to tend to, so he isn't gonna spend time dawdling. <quote>Why would a writer doing that make the build-up process even slower by throwing adjectives in at every given turn while simultaneously damaging the impact of their conclusions by having those also be defused with cool words I found in a dictionary?</quote> Going purple sparingly wouldn't severely damage the pacing. Certainly not telling you how to write your story, but this part of your post makes it sound like you think purple prose has to be an all-or-nothing deal. (EDIT: I hope I don't have to point out that I'm not talking about small instances of gogg-tier purple prose. Just, y'know - jazzing the descriptions up a bit.)</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
_Goggalor_ 05/17/18 1:11:17 PM #462:	Writing my 11th book right now. Serious question: how do you write about your frustrations with society without coming off as pretentious? Apparently everyone hates a Holden Caulfield type of character, but I want to make a dystopian world overrun by technology, based on our current society, which is obsessed with virtual experiences over real ones. --- Now playing: God of War Reading: Swann's Way by Marcel Proust <cite>_Goggalor_ posted [p:901502941] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>Writing my 11th book right now. Serious question: how do you write about your frustrations with society without coming off as pretentious? Apparently everyone hates a Holden Caulfield type of character, but I want to make a dystopian world overrun by technology, based on our current society, which is obsessed with virtual experiences over real ones.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
SGT_Conti 05/17/18 1:35:27 PM #463:	Explore it through your themes and don't use any character as a mouthpiece. --- Posted with GameRaven 3.4 <cite>SGT_Conti posted [p:901504256] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>Explore it through your themes and don't use any character as a mouthpiece.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Ulyanyx 05/17/18 1:39:12 PM #464:	call out other users and build yourself up so you can take control of the forums by swaying opinion to make you well respected, like a beacon of ignorance in a sea of knowledge. --- If you want me to reply to something in a topic, tag me because I lurk far more than I post. Sober from Alcohol since Jan 26th 2018 <cite>Ulyanyx posted [p:901504453] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>call out other users and build yourself up so you can take control of the forums by swaying opinion to make you well respected, like a beacon of ignorance in a sea of knowledge.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
_Goggalor_ 05/17/18 1:49:28 PM #465:	SGT_Conti posted... Explore it through your themes and don't use any character as a mouthpiece. Fair enough. So introduce the themes themselves, but let the reader decide how they feel about them? Also, any other good dystopian books I should read besides Brave new world? I've already read 1984 and Fahrenheit 451. --- Now playing: God of War Reading: Swann's Way by Marcel Proust <cite>_Goggalor_ posted [p:901505076] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>SGT_Conti posted...</cite> <quote>Explore it through your themes and don't use any character as a mouthpiece.</quote> Fair enough. So introduce the themes themselves, but let the reader decide how they feel about them? Also, any other good dystopian books I should read besides Brave new world? I've already read 1984 and Fahrenheit 451.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
#466	Post #466 was unavailable or deleted.
SGT_Conti 05/17/18 2:00:08 PM #467:	Just keep in mind I say this as someone who doesn't really read all that much at all anymore, and never went much into literature to begin with. It's better to have a character show their frustration toward a society through rebellious or disrespectful attitudes than to have them monologue or soliliquize. It's boring to read about a character info dumping their beliefs and it treats the reader like a fool who can't tell what a character is like without being explicitly told. --- Posted with GameRaven 3.4 <cite>SGT_Conti posted [p:901505717] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>Just keep in mind I say this as someone who doesn't really read all that much at all anymore, and never went much into literature to begin with. It's better to have a character show their frustration toward a society through rebellious or disrespectful attitudes than to have them monologue or soliliquize. It's boring to read about a character info dumping their beliefs and it treats the reader like a fool who can't tell what a character is like without being explicitly told.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
_Goggalor_ 05/17/18 2:14:04 PM #468:	SGT_Conti posted... Just keep in mind I say this as someone who doesn't really read all that much at all anymore, and never went much into literature to begin with. It's better to have a character show their frustration toward a society through rebellious or disrespectful attitudes than to have them monologue or soliliquize. It's boring to read about a character info dumping their beliefs and it treats the reader like a fool who can't tell what a character is like without being explicitly told. Oh, I agree. I'm about 5,000 words into my story and I'm not doing anything like preaching. Just telling how the world is reliant on technology for everything. No one has intimate relationships anymore because they can get everything they need from technology and all entertainment is simple and bite sized. Everything is artificial, including births, food, trees, everything organic replaced out of convenience. The main character doesn't like this, but is painted as an outlier who wishes things were like they used to be. Recycling centers exist where books and other objects deemed useless are burned and converted into fuel for the city. He's not preechy, just depressed and obsessed with the past mostly. --- Now playing: God of War Reading: Swann's Way by Marcel Proust <cite>_Goggalor_ posted [p:901506522] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>SGT_Conti posted...</cite> <quote>Just keep in mind I say this as someone who doesn't really read all that much at all anymore, and never went much into literature to begin with. It's better to have a character show their frustration toward a society through rebellious or disrespectful attitudes than to have them monologue or soliliquize. It's boring to read about a character info dumping their beliefs and it treats the reader like a fool who can't tell what a character is like without being explicitly told.</quote> Oh, I agree. I'm about 5,000 words into my story and I'm not doing anything like preaching. Just telling how the world is reliant on technology for everything. No one has intimate relationships anymore because they can get everything they need from technology and all entertainment is simple and bite sized. Everything is artificial, including births, food, trees, everything organic replaced out of convenience. The main character doesn't like this, but is painted as an outlier who wishes things were like they used to be. Recycling centers exist where books and other objects deemed useless are burned and converted into fuel for the city. He's not preechy, just depressed and obsessed with the past mostly.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
LinksLiege 05/17/18 2:20:34 PM #469:	Pick up the third book in the His Dark Materials trilogy and scan through the latter half until the book's "skeptic" character delivers a totally-not-an-author-tract speech about atheism - or more anti-theism, really - that goes on for at least a full page. Read the speech. Internalize it. Do the exact opposite of that speech. --- This is LinksLiege's signature. It is fantastic. <cite>LinksLiege posted [p:901506918] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>Pick up the third book in the His Dark Materials trilogy and scan through the latter half until the book's "skeptic" character delivers a totally-not-an-author-tract speech about atheism - or more anti-theism, really - that goes on for at least a full page. Read the speech. Internalize it. Do the exact opposite of that speech.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
SGT_Conti 05/17/18 2:26:25 PM #470:	What about Atlas Shrugged I hear that book has a lot of author preaching --- Posted with GameRaven 3.4 <cite>SGT_Conti posted [p:901507283] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>What about Atlas Shrugged I hear that book has a lot of author preaching</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
_Goggalor_ 05/17/18 2:37:46 PM #471:	SGT_Conti posted... What about Atlas Shrugged I hear that book has a lot of author preaching I think that's more a philosophy book iirc, not dystopian. And preaching isn't what I want to do, so even though my character is disappointed by the way the world is, I've made it a point to say he doesn't blame or resent the people for the way they are, nor does he shame them. He blames the convenience of technology itself and understands that the people are merely a product of the society they live in, which I believe is true of any society, real or fictional. --- Now playing: God of War Reading: Swann's Way by Marcel Proust <cite>_Goggalor_ posted [p:901507945] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>SGT_Conti posted...</cite> <quote>What about Atlas Shrugged I hear that book has a lot of author preaching</quote> I think that's more a philosophy book iirc, not dystopian. And preaching isn't what I want to do, so even though my character is disappointed by the way the world is, I've made it a point to say he doesn't blame or resent the people for the way they are, nor does he shame them. He blames the convenience of technology itself and understands that the people are merely a product of the society they live in, which I believe is true of any society, real or fictional.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
IloveJesus 05/17/18 2:41:08 PM #472:	_Goggalor_ posted... Also, any other good dystopian books I should read besides Brave new world? The Running Man? Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep? --- Jesus loves us. It only seems fair to love him back. <cite>IloveJesus posted [p:901508101] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>_Goggalor_ posted...</cite> <quote>Also, any other good dystopian books I should read besides Brave new world?</quote> The Running Man? Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
_Goggalor_ 05/17/18 3:30:31 PM #473:	Also, looking back, I guess I can see how I rubbed some people the wrong way. I just don't like Brandon Sanderson's books or GRRM, and I do honestly think Proust and Poe are much better. But people are free to like what they want and I'm not saying otherwise. --- Now playing: God of War Reading: Swann's Way by Marcel Proust <cite>_Goggalor_ posted [p:901510965] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>Also, looking back, I guess I can see how I rubbed some people the wrong way. I just don't like Brandon Sanderson's books or GRRM, and I do honestly think Proust and Poe are much better. But people are free to like what they want and I'm not saying otherwise.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Leanaunfurled 05/17/18 3:32:30 PM #474:	_Goggalor_ posted... Also, looking back, I guess I can see how I rubbed some people the wrong way. I just don't like Brandon Sanderson's books or GRRM, and I do honestly think Proust and Poe are much better. But people are free to like what they want and I'm not saying otherwise. As long as you're respectful in that manner, man. You just came off as fairly close-minded before. But I think as lovers of the written word, we should all always be learning and open for discussion, yeah? --- Currently Playing: idkstuff https://imgur.com/jycEJAt https://imgur.com/iOC77WJ <cite>Leanaunfurled posted [p:901511085] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>_Goggalor_ posted...</cite> <quote>Also, looking back, I guess I can see how I rubbed some people the wrong way. I just don't like Brandon Sanderson's books or GRRM, and I do honestly think Proust and Poe are much better. But people are free to like what they want and I'm not saying otherwise.</quote> As long as you're respectful in that manner, man. You just came off as fairly close-minded before. But I think as lovers of the written word, we should all always be learning and open for discussion, yeah?</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
_Goggalor_ 05/17/18 3:34:28 PM #475:	Leanaunfurled posted... _Goggalor_ posted... Also, looking back, I guess I can see how I rubbed some people the wrong way. I just don't like Brandon Sanderson's books or GRRM, and I do honestly think Proust and Poe are much better. But people are free to like what they want and I'm not saying otherwise. As long as you're respectful in that manner, man. You just came off as fairly close-minded before. But I think as lovers of the written word, we should all always be learning and open for discussion, yeah? Definitely. I have a deep respect for anyone that reads, no matter their preference. There's something magical about books and their power to entertain and enthrall, to transport our minds to different worlds through text alone. --- Now playing: God of War Reading: Swann's Way by Marcel Proust <cite>_Goggalor_ posted [p:901511191] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>Leanaunfurled posted...</cite> <quote><cite>_Goggalor_ posted...</cite> <quote>Also, looking back, I guess I can see how I rubbed some people the wrong way. I just don't like Brandon Sanderson's books or GRRM, and I do honestly think Proust and Poe are much better. But people are free to like what they want and I'm not saying otherwise.</quote> As long as you're respectful in that manner, man. You just came off as fairly close-minded before. But I think as lovers of the written word, we should all always be learning and open for discussion, yeah?</quote> Definitely. I have a deep respect for anyone that reads, no matter their preference. There's something magical about books and their power to entertain and enthrall, to transport our minds to different worlds through text alone.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
SGT_Conti 05/17/18 3:41:25 PM #476:	I like the direction this topic has taken everyone is just civil now and talking about ways to write --- "I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I have ended up where I needed to be." <cite>SGT_Conti posted [p:901511571] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>I like the direction this topic has taken everyone is just civil now and talking about ways to write</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
_Goggalor_ 05/17/18 3:46:21 PM #477:	SGT_Conti posted... I like the direction this topic has taken everyone is just civil now and talking about ways to write Same. I'm going to buy Brave New World today for research purposes. The book I'm writing is pretty ambitious in terms of scope (three "books" with two parts each, about 120-150,000 words total) and I want inspiration beyond my initial prompt of noticing how over reliant society seems to be on technology. --- Now playing: God of War Reading: Swann's Way by Marcel Proust <cite>_Goggalor_ posted [p:901511847] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>SGT_Conti posted...</cite> <quote>I like the direction this topic has taken everyone is just civil now and talking about ways to write</quote> Same. I'm going to buy Brave New World today for research purposes. The book I'm writing is pretty ambitious in terms of scope (three "books" with two parts each, about 120-150,000 words total) and I want inspiration beyond my initial prompt of noticing how over reliant society seems to be on technology.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
#478	Post #478 was unavailable or deleted.
LinksLiege 05/17/18 3:57:55 PM #479:	IloveJesus posted... _Goggalor_ posted... Also, any other good dystopian books I should read besides Brave new world? Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep? Pick a Philip K. Dick book at random and it'll probably be dystopian in some way. He's really fond of having Earth get destroyed/crippled and people migrate to other planets, with the stories focusing on some way in which people are dealing with it. --- This is LinksLiege's signature. It is fantastic. <cite>LinksLiege posted [p:901512491] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>IloveJesus posted...</cite> <quote><cite>_Goggalor_ posted...</cite> <quote>Also, any other good dystopian books I should read besides Brave new world?</quote> Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?</quote> Pick a Philip K. Dick book at random and it'll probably be dystopian in some way. He's really fond of having Earth get destroyed/crippled and people migrate to other planets, with the stories focusing on some way in which people are dealing with it.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
_Goggalor_ 05/17/18 4:17:01 PM #480:	Also excited to start "One hundred years of solitude". I've owned the book before but I never read it. --- Now playing: God of War Reading: Swann's Way by Marcel Proust <cite>_Goggalor_ posted [p:901513556] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>Also excited to start "One hundred years of solitude". I've owned the book before but I never read it.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
#481	Post #481 was unavailable or deleted.
Tyranthraxus 05/17/18 5:59:45 PM #482:	_Goggalor_ posted... Also, any other good dystopian books I should read besides Brave new world? I've already read 1984 and Fahrenheit 451. Jennifer Government --- https://puu.sh/tcLsT/24f4611235.png https://imgur.com/dQgC4kv <cite>Tyranthraxus posted [p:901521678] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>_Goggalor_ posted...</cite> <quote>Also, any other good dystopian books I should read besides Brave new world? I've already read 1984 and Fahrenheit 451.</quote> Jennifer Government</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Tyranthraxus 05/17/18 6:02:48 PM #483:	_Goggalor_ posted... Also, looking back, I guess I can see how I rubbed some people the wrong way. I just don't like Brandon Sanderson's books or GRRM, and I do honestly think Proust and Poe are much better. But people are free to like what they want and I'm not saying otherwise. Going forward, goggs, I just want you to keep in mind that there is a very big difference between "I don't like GRRM or Sanderson" versus "GRRM and Sanderson are shitty authors" --- https://puu.sh/tcLsT/24f4611235.png https://imgur.com/dQgC4kv <cite>Tyranthraxus posted [p:901521952] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>_Goggalor_ posted...</cite> <quote>Also, looking back, I guess I can see how I rubbed some people the wrong way. I just don't like Brandon Sanderson's books or GRRM, and I do honestly think Proust and Poe are much better. But people are free to like what they want and I'm not saying otherwise.</quote> Going forward, goggs, I just want you to keep in mind that there is a very big difference between "I don't like GRRM or Sanderson" versus "GRRM and Sanderson are shitty authors"</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
_Goggalor_ 05/17/18 6:54:26 PM #484:	16-BITTER posted... _Goggalor_ posted... I want to make a dystopian world overrun by technology, based on our current society, which is obsessed with virtual experiences over real ones. Seems reality beat you to the punch. Well yeah, it's based on personal experience and my frustrations with where society is at and, if technology continues to advance, may be headed. --- Now playing: God of War Reading: Swann's Way by Marcel Proust <cite>_Goggalor_ posted [p:901526029] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>16-BITTER posted...</cite> <quote><cite>_Goggalor_ posted...</cite> <quote>I want to make a dystopian world overrun by technology, based on our current society, which is obsessed with virtual experiences over real ones.</quote> Seems reality beat you to the punch.</quote> Well yeah, it's based on personal experience and my frustrations with where society is at and, if technology continues to advance, may be headed.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
KobeSystem 05/17/18 7:11:21 PM #485:	marthsheretoo posted... sprinkling the parched dust with crimson droplets of escaping life fluid. Takes a drink* --- http://www.last.fm/user/KobeSystem92 \| https://pbs.twimg.com/profile_images/725087214401671170/02UGgybe_400x400.jpg WIN SEXANGELS GREATKERZ <cite>KobeSystem posted [p:901527210] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>marthsheretoo posted...</cite> <quote>sprinkling the parched dust with crimson droplets of escaping life fluid.</quote> Takes a drink*</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
AvantgardeAClue 05/18/18 2:28:12 AM #486:	_Goggalor_ posted... 16-BITTER posted... _Goggalor_ posted... I want to make a dystopian world overrun by technology, based on our current society, which is obsessed with virtual experiences over real ones. Seems reality beat you to the punch. Well yeah, it's based on personal experience and my frustrations with where society is at and, if technology continues to advance, may be headed. Technology is fucking dope Only luddites think its ruining society Hurr Clue but look at people today Discipline yo self Needless to say that book is probably gonna be filled with soliloquies where the main character kicks knowledge on the reader whether they wanted to or not huh Done playing with your ass --- Sometimes I say things and I'm not voice acting. <cite>AvantgardeAClue posted [p:901551639] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>_Goggalor_ posted...</cite> <quote><cite>16-BITTER posted...</cite> <quote><cite>_Goggalor_ posted...</cite> <quote>I want to make a dystopian world overrun by technology, based on our current society, which is obsessed with virtual experiences over real ones.</quote> Seems reality beat you to the punch.</quote> Well yeah, it's based on personal experience and my frustrations with where society is at and, if technology continues to advance, may be headed.</quote> Technology is fucking dope Only luddites think its ruining society Hurr Clue but look at people today Discipline yo self Needless to say that book is probably gonna be filled with soliloquies where the main character kicks knowledge on the reader whether they wanted to or not huh Done playing with your ass</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
catboy0_0 05/18/18 2:29:43 AM #487:	Can you tell Goggalor I'm not a SJW <cite>catboy0_0 posted [p:901551680] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>Can you tell Goggalor I'm not a SJW</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
chill02 05/18/18 2:50:57 AM #488:	488 --- Ave, true to Caesar. <cite>chill02 posted [p:901552330] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>488</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
MKScorpion214 05/18/18 4:52:55 AM #489:	Welp --- http://i.imgtc.com/c4gjrYX.jpg http://i.imgtc.com/6R8abqK.jpg <cite>MKScorpion214 posted [p:901555030] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>Welp</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
YOUHAVENOHOPE 05/18/18 5:03:50 AM #490:	how do i tell my girlfriend im a psychopath i think i do a good job of hiding it - goggalor --- https://imgur.com/kpXTakw https://imgur.com/Pto3yPa http://media.giphy.com/media/NBVBnHv8bV13q/giphy.gif <cite>YOUHAVENOHOPE posted [p:901555221] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>how do i tell my girlfriend im a psychopath i think i do a good job of hiding it - goggalor</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Delirious_Beard 05/18/18 5:24:57 AM #491:	my favorite goggalor post was when he said MC chris was one of the best rappers around, and way better than garbage like kanye west --- https://imgur.com/5UL2v5u "Does our ruin benefit the earth? Does it help the grass to grow, the sun to shine? Is this darkness in you, too?" <cite>Delirious_Beard posted [p:901555667] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>my favorite goggalor post was when he said MC chris was one of the best rappers around, and way better than garbage like kanye west</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
SGT_Conti 05/18/18 6:09:59 AM #492:	C'mon, we were doing so well. We're past picking on Goggalor and now we're just talking about story-writing. I want to end this topic nicer than it started. --- Posted with GameRaven 3.4 <cite>SGT_Conti posted [p:901556641] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>C'mon, we were doing so well. We're past picking on Goggalor and now we're just talking about story-writing. I want to end this topic nicer than it started.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Funkydog 05/18/18 6:18:22 AM #493:	SGT_Conti posted... C'mon, we were doing so well. We're past picking on Goggalor and now we're just talking about story-writing. I want to end this topic nicer than it started. That's not the CE way though. --- https://imgur.com/BGbZK <cite>Funkydog posted [p:901556807] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>SGT_Conti posted...</cite> <quote>C'mon, we were doing so well. We're past picking on Goggalor and now we're just talking about story-writing. I want to end this topic nicer than it started.</quote> That's not the CE way though.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
OpShaft 05/18/18 6:58:42 AM #494:	Delirious_Beard posted... my favorite goggalor post was when he said MC chris was one of the best rappers around, and way better than garbage like kanye west To be fair, Kanye is garbage --- Posted with GameRaven 3.4 <cite>OpShaft posted [p:901557800] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>Delirious_Beard posted...</cite> <quote>my favorite goggalor post was when he said MC chris was one of the best rappers around, and way better than garbage like kanye west</quote> To be fair, Kanye is garbage</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
MedeaLysistrata 05/18/18 7:06:08 AM #495:	I should work on my novel --- let's positive thinking [do not stare into the glassy manga eyes] <cite>MedeaLysistrata posted [p:901557973] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>I should work on my novel</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
A_Good_Boy 05/18/18 7:09:40 AM #496:	Delirious_Beard posted... my favorite goggalor post was when he said MC chris was one of the best rappers around, and way better than garbage like kanye west lol --- Who is? I am! <cite>A_Good_Boy posted [p:901558060] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>Delirious_Beard posted...</cite> <quote>my favorite goggalor post was when he said MC chris was one of the best rappers around, and way better than garbage like kanye west</quote> lol</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
_Goggalor_ 05/18/18 8:38:49 AM #497:	MedeaLysistrata posted... I should work on my novel What's it about? --- Now playing: God of War Reading: Swann's Way by Marcel Proust <cite>_Goggalor_ posted [p:901560590] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote><cite>MedeaLysistrata posted...</cite> <quote>I should work on my novel</quote> What's it about?</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Patchwork 05/18/18 8:39:53 AM #498:	A snobbish recluse with severe psychological issues who tries to fight everyone on a video game forum. It's called Gog of Bore. --- The mind is its own place, and in itself Can make a heav'n of hell, a hell of heav'n. <cite>Patchwork posted [p:901560629] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>A snobbish recluse with severe psychological issues who tries to fight everyone on a video game forum. It's called Gog of Bore.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Zero_Destroyer 05/18/18 8:40:07 AM #499:	"500," he said. --- Enjoy movies and television? Check out my blog! I do reviews and analyses. http://fictionrantreview.wordpress.com/ (The Force Awakens spoiler review up!) <cite>Zero_Destroyer posted [p:901560646] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>"500," he said.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Zero_Destroyer 05/18/18 8:40:24 AM #500:	o --- Enjoy movies and television? Check out my blog! I do reviews and analyses. http://fictionrantreview.wordpress.com/ (The Force Awakens spoiler review up!) <cite>Zero_Destroyer posted [p:901560656] in Lmao did G... [t:76607222]...</cite> <quote>o</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Topic List	Page List: 1 ... 6, 7, 8, 9, 10

Current Events > Lmao did Goggalor close his pretentious writing topic after his own was posted (+) Yeah! (+)

Current Events > Lmao did Goggalor close his pretentious writing topic after his own was posted