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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 2:32:04 PM #1: |
Taking wings to the streets in the dead of night he will fight those who would graffitti his city, beat up his people with racist slurs and of course dispense true Justice against a police force intent on perverting it. The pilot would open with a young black man being stopped for speeding and the cops pull out a gun and drugs to plant into his vehicle. They tell the poor man to touch the gun or they will beat him more. That is when our hero arrives. --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Zikten 06/19/17 2:33:13 PM #2: |
Only if the cops are evil. If he is just killing random cops without evidence that's bad
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 2:34:46 PM #3: |
Zikten posted...
Only if the cops are evil. If he is just killing random cops without evidence that's bad he won't kill cops and only the corrupt ones since the thing is all about true Justice of course if the cops are good he likes them --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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boxington 06/19/17 2:37:06 PM #4: |
would he only target corrupt cops, and not other criminals?
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 2:38:44 PM #5: |
boxington posted...
would he only target corrupt cops, and not other criminals? if he sees a criminal ofc but his #1 priority is police corruption --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Flasbangs 06/19/17 2:39:33 PM #6: |
Wouldn't even read Batman.
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ChromaticAngel 06/19/17 2:41:22 PM #7: |
One of the reasons Batman did what he did was because the GCPD was super corrupt. Despite that, he still only went after law breaking criminals, and not the police.
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 2:42:17 PM #8: |
ChromaticAngel posted...
One of the reasons Batman did what he did was because the GCPD was super corrupt. Despite that, he still only went after law breaking criminals, and not the police. tsk tsk batman --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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gatorsPENSbucs 06/19/17 2:47:31 PM #9: |
Yah, as long as it's not called Batman.
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 2:48:58 PM #10: |
gatorsPENSbucs posted...
Yah, as long as it's not called Batman. How about Justice Night? Cause of Batman's favorite line: "I am justice! I am the night! I am batman!" All this guy has to say is "I am Justice Night!" --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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infinitydev2020 06/19/17 2:51:10 PM #11: |
Wait wait, so if his number 1 priority is corrupt cops, what about the rest of his villains? What about joker, Bane, riddler, Two-Face etc. cause I'm pretty sure those guys can screw up Gotham more than any corrupt cop could hope for.
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 2:53:00 PM #12: |
infinitydev2020 posted...
Wait wait, so if his number 1 priority is corrupt cops, what about the rest of his villains? What about joker, Bane, riddler, Two-Face etc. cause I'm pretty sure those guys can screw up Gotham more than any corrupt cop could hope for. why would this original story have Joker in it? it would look more like the real world but maybe some corrupt cops could be supervillians --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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stone 06/19/17 2:55:17 PM #13: |
Batman was created nearly 80 years ago, so chances are there's already a villain in his rogue gallery whose gimmick is going after corrupt cops.
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ChromaticAngel 06/19/17 2:58:28 PM #14: |
stone posted...
Batman was created nearly 80 years ago, so chances are there's already a villain in his rogue gallery whose gimmick is going after corrupt cops. Jason Todd, basically. --- ... Copied to Clipboard!
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stone 06/19/17 3:04:05 PM #15: |
ChromaticAngel posted...
stone posted...Batman was created nearly 80 years ago, so chances are there's already a villain in his rogue gallery whose gimmick is going after corrupt cops. Right. Jason also goes after villains as well, though, no? (not all that familiar with the whole story aside the fact that he died and eventually came back all pissy) --- PONG WAS REAL? I thought that was just a story parents told kids to scare them ... Copied to Clipboard!
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EyeWontBeFooled 06/19/17 3:05:37 PM #16: |
Isn't one of Batman's villains already a similar concept? Prometheus?
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ROD 06/19/17 3:07:44 PM #17: |
darkphoenix181 posted...
When his community cried for Justice and found the department of Justice to not be for them, a young black man was inspired to be the Justice his community needed. I would read it, if it's a character who happens to be black. It'd be cool. If it's a "OGOGOGOG LOOK AT ME, MY ENTIRE COMIC BOOK CHARACTER REVOLVES AROUND RACE AND ALL RACE RACE RACE RACIAL GO ME LOOK AT MY RACE!" that's a no. I'm not really into comics, but I saw black panther in the avengers civil war movie and thought he was awesome, and really wanted to see a black panther movie. But now there are a lot of tumblrish articles out there about basically it being a movie about race and his entire character revolves around it, so no thanks. I'd not watch batman movies if they revolved around his ethnicity as well, by the way. --- Nov. 3 = best day in Gamefaqs history! ~I don't have any alternate accounts~ Welcome to the Minus World!: http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/1247-the-minus-world ... Copied to Clipboard!
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 3:08:02 PM #18: |
EyeWontBeFooled posted...
Isn't one of Batman's villains already a similar concept? Prometheus? having a black man fighting against police corruption why is that a VILLAIN? hmm? --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 3:08:59 PM #19: |
ROD posted...
well we can make him a black republican and rich so you won't have to fear but he won't like Trump --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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ROD 06/19/17 3:10:20 PM #20: |
darkphoenix181 posted...
ROD posted... ... fear what? And if he liked cheeto I'd skip the movie no matter what *barfs* --- Nov. 3 = best day in Gamefaqs history! ~I don't have any alternate accounts~ Welcome to the Minus World!: http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/1247-the-minus-world ... Copied to Clipboard!
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stone 06/19/17 3:11:21 PM #21: |
darkphoenix181 posted...
ROD posted... Will his parents have been killed in front of him by corrupt cops as a kid? --- PONG WAS REAL? I thought that was just a story parents told kids to scare them ... Copied to Clipboard!
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ChromaticAngel 06/19/17 3:13:37 PM #22: |
stone posted...
That sounds kind of cool honestly. Antibatman --- ... Copied to Clipboard!
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 3:15:16 PM #23: |
stone posted...
Will his parents have been killed in front of him by corrupt cops as a kid? his dad is alive but in jail on death row and says he is innocent and was framed his mother was forced to become a hooker and the cops well... wait.. then how do I make him rich...hmm... oh I got it, a distant uncle makes him a heir and dies and he gets funds much later in his life or wins a lawsuit or something --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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trappedunderice 06/19/17 3:16:41 PM #24: |
J_5!
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stone 06/19/17 3:19:09 PM #25: |
darkphoenix181 posted...
stone posted...Will his parents have been killed in front of him by corrupt cops as a kid? Maybe he's a hacker and manages to steal money from the Police Department's bank account without them noticing? Or the Police Department's accountant? (though him working there would link him too closely to his parents) I'd go the hacker route. Could have some comics being about him being chased by the Police's (or the bank's) security department or whatnot. --- PONG WAS REAL? I thought that was just a story parents told kids to scare them ... Copied to Clipboard!
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stone 06/19/17 3:19:52 PM #26: |
But heck, why does he have to be rich? He could have an everyday job that pays just enough for his living needs. Doesn't need all the gadgets Batman's money buys him.
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 3:20:01 PM #27: |
stone posted...
darkphoenix181 posted...stone posted...Will his parents have been killed in front of him by corrupt cops as a kid? this doesn't sound like true justice though --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 3:20:27 PM #28: |
stone posted...
But heck, why does he have to be rich? He could have an everyday job that pays just enough for his living needs. Doesn't need all the gadgets Batman's money buys him. I guess he don't have to be --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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stone 06/19/17 3:21:23 PM #29: |
I mean, making him too much like Batman would be a blatant rip-off. Make him as original as possible. Even if he was inspired by Batman at first, he doesn't have to be like him in nearly every aspect, except black and going after cops instead of villains.
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ROD 06/19/17 3:24:55 PM #30: |
darkphoenix181 posted...
stone posted...Will his parents have been killed in front of him by corrupt cops as a kid? If the idea is to make it stereotypical and cliche instead of just a cool character that happens to be black, say he became rich when his hip hop demo went big. Now he is a 50 Cent like artist by day, but superhero by night. --- Nov. 3 = best day in Gamefaqs history! ~I don't have any alternate accounts~ Welcome to the Minus World!: http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/1247-the-minus-world ... Copied to Clipboard!
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 3:27:32 PM #31: |
ROD posted...
If the idea is to make it stereotypical and cliche instead of just a cool character that happens to be black, say he became rich when his hip hop demo went big. Now he is a 50 Cent like artist by day, but superhero by night. nah we don't want the stereotypical hip hop dude if anything he will be a like a buff nerd who likes comics and animu --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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ROD 06/19/17 3:27:54 PM #32: |
darkphoenix181 posted...
stone posted...But heck, why does he have to be rich? He could have an everyday job that pays just enough for his living needs. Doesn't need all the gadgets Batman's money buys him. after he became a hip hop singer, he set up his own record label, F.I.S.T. records (Furious International Singer Team) . Instead of the Wayne Enterprises W, his logo is a stylized fist like the BLM one. The ironic part is his character (superhero) is "the first", his suit is like nolan batman's but it has a fist instead of a bat (different fist lol), and instead of the bat-ears it has earpieces like Dre Dre Beats. The fist-thing in his chest also comes out and smacks people in the face. --- Nov. 3 = best day in Gamefaqs history! ~I don't have any alternate accounts~ Welcome to the Minus World!: http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/1247-the-minus-world ... Copied to Clipboard!
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ROD 06/19/17 3:28:31 PM #33: |
darkphoenix181 posted...
ROD posted...If the idea is to make it stereotypical and cliche instead of just a cool character that happens to be black, say he became rich when his hip hop demo went big. Now he is a 50 Cent like artist by day, but superhero by night. lol fair enough XD Ignore post # 32, even though it's funny as hell lol. I do like the nuff otaku thing actually --- Nov. 3 = best day in Gamefaqs history! ~I don't have any alternate accounts~ Welcome to the Minus World!: http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/1247-the-minus-world ... Copied to Clipboard!
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ROD 06/19/17 3:29:40 PM #34: |
ROD posted...
darkphoenix181 posted...ROD posted...If the idea is to make it stereotypical and cliche instead of just a cool character that happens to be black, say he became rich when his hip hop demo went big. Now he is a 50 Cent like artist by day, but superhero by night. that's how he became rich: He sold anime designs to some company! --- Nov. 3 = best day in Gamefaqs history! ~I don't have any alternate accounts~ Welcome to the Minus World!: http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/1247-the-minus-world ... Copied to Clipboard!
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 3:30:25 PM #35: |
ROD posted...
darkphoenix181 posted...ROD posted...If the idea is to make it stereotypical and cliche instead of just a cool character that happens to be black, say he became rich when his hip hop demo went big. Now he is a 50 Cent like artist by day, but superhero by night. a such he will be smart but not like super genius since many animu nerds get like STEM degree he can be like that smart maybe an engineer would help him make gadgets and stuff --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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stone 06/19/17 3:31:01 PM #36: |
Could be the creator of some website he ended up selling to Google for a few millions, or something, if you want him to be a nerd or something.
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Mernardi 06/19/17 3:31:50 PM #37: |
Sounds like Nighthawk tbh.
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ROD 06/19/17 3:33:05 PM #38: |
ROD posted...
darkphoenix181 posted...stone posted...But heck, why does he have to be rich? He could have an everyday job that pays just enough for his living needs. Doesn't need all the gadgets Batman's money buys him. Come on guys, no love for "the fist"? lol lol lol the bat signal could look like a fist too. His car would be the swagmobile --- Nov. 3 = best day in Gamefaqs history! ~I don't have any alternate accounts~ Welcome to the Minus World!: http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/1247-the-minus-world ... Copied to Clipboard!
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stone 06/19/17 3:34:26 PM #39: |
ROD posted...
ROD posted...darkphoenix181 posted...stone posted...But heck, why does he have to be rich? He could have an everyday job that pays just enough for his living needs. Doesn't need all the gadgets Batman's money buys him. "Corrupt cops, get ready TO GET FISTED!" (or for a fisting?) --- PONG WAS REAL? I thought that was just a story parents told kids to scare them ... Copied to Clipboard!
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 3:36:13 PM #40: |
ROD posted...
nah, not for this character if you want cliche rapper char then make a hero whose power is literally he beats up villians with raps like he engages them in flow contest and with each sick burn they literally get hurt --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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stone 06/19/17 3:36:59 PM #41: |
darkphoenix181 posted...
ROD posted... Sorta like the Elite Beat Agents? --- PONG WAS REAL? I thought that was just a story parents told kids to scare them ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Cj_WlLL_VVlN 06/19/17 3:42:07 PM #42: |
Only if it was one issue. Picture this...
City is overwhelmed with thuggery and villainy. One man "Social Media Justice"is going to ignore all that and go after the cops with his trusty side kick Outrage. Two middle class college students, Marcus (our black champion of the night) and Bradley (his white side kick who decided to check his privilege) have finally had enough. It's time to suit up and fight the status quo. They go to the costume store and buy masks and capes. They then head online and arm up with katanas and ninja stars... First scene the two boys are sitting in the cave of justice (outrage man's mom's basement) browsing social media where they come across a story of another black youth unjustly shot dead by the police while walking home from Bible study or building houses for the homeless. "It's our first case and look the media has already released the cops name" social media justice yells. Outrage man is excited and quickly finds his home address as it was leaked on reddit earlier that day. They wait til nightfall and proceed to the house. They break in and find the killer cop crying in his wife's lap saying "I didn't want to, I didn't want to, but I had to come home to you and Tommy (his 3 year old son)". Not even slightly deterred because cops sign up for a dangerous job and are completely expendable they make their grand entrance. Social media man screams '' you have killed your last innocent, pig" as outrage man and him draw their katanas. As social media man charges outrage man sees that the pigs partner is there and is taking aim at social media man. He pushes social media man out of the way and is clipped in the arm. He immediately begins bawling and screaming in pain. Social media man pulls out a ninja star and gets ready to throw it at the partner but is shot center mass 3 times by the cops wife who armed up after receiving death threats against her and her 3 year old son. As the police arrive and handcuff outrage man he snivels "another innocent black man gunned down, but you shoot the white guy in the arm. I knew you could hit a limb if you didn't hate all minorities". A few days later in prison outrage man is reading the newspaper and finds out the innocent Bible study kid had been robbing a bank and drew on the cop they'd tried to kill but that social media didn't bother to wait for facts before spinning their story. The end. Yea I'd probably read that. --- Give me your tired, your poor,Your masses yearning to breathe free,The wretched refuse of your teeming shore.Send these, the homeless, tempest tossed, to me. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 3:44:17 PM #43: |
^ wow
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ROD 06/19/17 3:48:22 PM #44: |
stone posted...
ROD posted...ROD posted...darkphoenix181 posted...stone posted...But heck, why does he have to be rich? He could have an everyday job that pays just enough for his living needs. Doesn't need all the gadgets Batman's money buys him. lmao --- Nov. 3 = best day in Gamefaqs history! ~I don't have any alternate accounts~ Welcome to the Minus World!: http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/1247-the-minus-world ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Cj_WlLL_VVlN 06/19/17 3:48:55 PM #45: |
Nah not at all. Just trying to make it more realistic.
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stone 06/19/17 3:51:10 PM #46: |
ROD posted...
stone posted...ROD posted...ROD posted...darkphoenix181 posted...stone posted...But heck, why does he have to be rich? He could have an everyday job that pays just enough for his living needs. Doesn't need all the gadgets Batman's money buys him. Maybe he could switch around and use both ;p "YOU LOOK LIKE YOU COULD USE A FISTING! HAVE AT THEE!" --- PONG WAS REAL? I thought that was just a story parents told kids to scare them ... Copied to Clipboard!
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ROD 06/19/17 3:53:21 PM #47: |
stone posted...
ROD posted...stone posted...ROD posted...ROD posted...darkphoenix181 posted...stone posted...But heck, why does he have to be rich? He could have an everyday job that pays just enough for his living needs. Doesn't need all the gadgets Batman's money buys him. hahaha When he's putting on his fist suit, he last part he puts on is his right glove. The comic book shows him putting on his suit. The last two panels say: "get ready...." (puts on left glove) "FOR A FISTING!!!" *Puts on right glove dramatically and clenches fist* bahahahahaa --- Nov. 3 = best day in Gamefaqs history! ~I don't have any alternate accounts~ Welcome to the Minus World!: http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/1247-the-minus-world ... Copied to Clipboard!
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darkphoenix181 06/19/17 3:55:31 PM #48: |
stone posted...
"YOU LOOK LIKE YOU COULD USE A FISTING! HAVE AT THEE!" this made me think of an alt universe ver of the character Justice Knight he wears full knight armor of head to toe and rides a mystical horse the cops are about to beat up a black kid and he shows up "Good sirs, I feel a foul sense of wrongfulness overwhelming the fair roads. Wilt thee repent as evildoers or shalt my scabbard beat the sins out of thine lips?" Police: what the f--- BAM SWAM SHAM "Come forth trusty steed, we return to Camelot Cave. Young man, let it be known that true Knight doth walk these streets and fair maiden and lad alike shall be watched vigilantly!" --- sigless user is me or am I? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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stone 06/19/17 3:58:22 PM #49: |
ROD posted...
When he's putting on his fist suit, he last part he puts on is his right glove. And he could put his gloves on like latex medical gloves when he says it ;) --- PONG WAS REAL? I thought that was just a story parents told kids to scare them ... Copied to Clipboard!
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ROD 06/19/17 4:02:50 PM #50: |
stone posted...
ROD posted...When he's putting on his fist suit, he last part he puts on is his right glove. hahaha YES! --- Nov. 3 = best day in Gamefaqs history! ~I don't have any alternate accounts~ Welcome to the Minus World!: http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/1247-the-minus-world ... Copied to Clipboard!
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