Board 8 > The Writing Academy Week 2 Prompt: Let's have an adventure!

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Achromatic
04/14/12 7:42:00 PM
#1:


Note: You can still judge week 1 until the end of Monday.

Last week's prompt brought some interesting entries, and to be honest I was fairly disappointed not at the quality, but the effort that had gone in to some of the entries. I will, of course, never tell someone to spend time they don't have but when you are given two weeks I would hope you could spare more than a little bit to write it out!

But nonetheless I take the blame, because I have been told my prompt sucked. Very well then! I accept this burden and to make it right I shall go on a long journey to atone for my sin! I will meet a very attractive young woman, a wise man who acts old but is barely ten years older than me, and somehow make several mortal enemies.

I SHALL HAVE AN ADVENTURE!

Adventure is a genre not strictly defined. Adventure stories don't actually have to be about an adventure itself, sometimes the ideas expressed within it are adventurous. An adventure can be something mundane made grand by the characters you write.

Most importantly, an adventure comes from the heart.

Stories can not be longer than 4,000 words. No, really, not a single word over.

Don't be held back and do not be confined by this prompt. Let your imagination soar into the wind and let it take you where it will.

Happy writing, all entries due April 29th.

Prompt in Bold: Adventure Genre.

Please send all stories to [email protected]. There is no way they will get lost.

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leo3leo
04/14/12 7:44:00 PM
#2:


I know what I'm doing for the next ten days until my final exam! (hint it isn't studying)
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Natwaf_akidna
04/14/12 7:57:00 PM
#3:


Adventure?

Hmm.

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catastrophy15
04/14/12 8:22:00 PM
#4:


I'll try this if I have the time.

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Jeff Zero
04/14/12 8:48:00 PM
#5:


Your prompt was fine, Chris. I really think most of us could do pretty well with it if we put our minds to it. As it stands, I didn't care for anything I read.

I apologize for submitting a joke entry. I do, however, again draw attention to one GenesisSaga for firmly, frankly and deftly addressing the most glaring problems with said joke entry. Good on her; she definitely knows her stuff. (Lisel did a marvelous job bringing imagery into the fold, so honorary mention there.)

I will only submit if I have time, Chris, as I will submit something that is not, in fact, a joke post. I have classes, work shifts, two plays (and their subsequent reports), a musical performance (and its subsequent report), a theatre presentation and the rest of a feature-length screenplay to attend to so I may not have a chance this time around. Oh, and a research essay, but pfft, too easy.

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GenesisSaga
04/14/12 8:51:00 PM
#6:


Genny has an idea. She will start tomorrow and not a twelve days from now.

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Natwaf_akidna
04/14/12 8:53:00 PM
#7:


Huh, re-reading Dimension Clash actually gave me an idea.

Let's see if I can follow-through this time >_>

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KokoroAkechi
04/14/12 9:45:00 PM
#8:


I've been writing for the past two hours now... and it's turning into not an adventure >.>

but i dont really want to scrap this.

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saveus_Maria
04/15/12 2:36:00 AM
#9:


Tag.

From: KokoroAkechi | #008
I've been writing for the past two hours now... and it's turning into not an adventure >.>

but i dont really want to scrap this.


Keep going. Everything in life is an adventure.

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Raka_Putra
04/15/12 7:34:00 PM
#10:


...tag.

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GenesisSaga
04/15/12 8:18:00 PM
#11:


I'm so proud of myself. I said I'd start on this today and I really did. It's mostly just bullet notes, but I do have the beginning and end drafted out at least. It's bridging it together in under 4000 words I'm going to have to work on (shouldn't be too difficult). This is going to be awesome.

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MUKMASTER2
04/15/12 9:30:00 PM
#12:


What's minimum length?

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Natwaf_akidna
04/15/12 9:35:00 PM
#13:


You really want to hype us?

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GenesisSaga
04/15/12 9:46:00 PM
#14:


Well unlike last time, Pram I'm not going to be silly enough to name a character after myself so you won't know it's mine unless I say so. If you don't know it's me, you can't tell where the hype will fall! ^_^

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Natwaf_akidna
04/16/12 10:22:00 PM
#15:


... man, I don't know how to open my story.

Oh well, meat of the story first.

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Blind Azathoth
04/17/12 6:28:00 PM
#16:


Reading the topics for this contest is like watching Star Trek: The Next Generation after being in the original Star Trek. I feel so lost and bewildered. WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE. WHAT'D YOU DO WITH SEPHSBLADE AND BOKO AND TURN.

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Natwaf_akidna
04/17/12 6:32:00 PM
#17:


Less yappin' more writin'

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Achromatic
04/17/12 10:33:00 PM
#18:


Week 1 Standings:

2 - Winner
3 - Sir Chris' Favorite of the Week
5
9
4
6
8
1
7

Claim your stories as you wish, I know most of you did informally but I will never force people to REVEAL THEIR IDENTITIES and I may have lost the e-mails in question *cough*

Basically for a top 3 finish you get points.
Winner gets 3 points
second two points
third one point.

Simple enough

If you are my favorite for a week you get 1 extra point regardless of where you finish. Call it host bias!

Anyway keep in mind this doesn't mean too much so don't worry about it. Just continue to improve and have fun =)

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Natwaf_akidna
04/17/12 10:43:00 PM
#19:


I may have lost the e-mails in question *cough*

Poor Raka and... Haguile, was it? Then again, the former loathed his work, so all's well that ends well.

Which reminds me, Santa's run also had problems with my email. Weird.

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Achromatic
04/17/12 11:35:00 PM
#20:


Yes well my main e-mail has a lot of stuff flying and whizzing around, so that's why I changed to this new one.

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Blind Azathoth
04/18/12 6:31:00 AM
#21:


Hmm. Can we submit multiple entries? I doubt I'll actually be un-lazy enough to write more than one, but a man should have hopes and dreams.

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Achromatic
04/18/12 6:32:00 AM
#22:


From: Blind Azathoth | #021
Hmm. Can we submit multiple entries? I doubt I'll actually be un-lazy enough to write more than one, but a man should have hopes and dreams.


sure why not.

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saveus_Maria
04/18/12 6:37:00 AM
#23:


the politicking

it hurts

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_Carlemagne_
04/18/12 8:12:00 AM
#24:


I'm not going to lie. I'm having problems with this one since adventure is not one of my strong genres and I'm busy studying for finals.

But I should have somethign ready

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GenesisSaga
04/19/12 5:57:00 PM
#25:


edwards only got 3rd? Psh. You people don't recognize true talent!

(I'm kidding but I still thought his was the best)

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Blind Azathoth
04/20/12 7:49:00 AM
#26:


I had a bunch of ideas, and spent a lot of time thinking about how to mix a few of them into a story, and then a lot of time trying to make any one of them into a story, and then I just started writing something completely different that includes none of them. Hooray.

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Pram_the_Oracle
04/20/12 7:55:00 AM
#27:


That's almost what i did with the first prompt >_>

Then I tried combining them and, well, y'all know the rest.

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Blind Azathoth
04/20/12 3:04:00 PM
#28:


THE REST IS HISTORY.

I should probably get around to reading the first week's stories sometime soon...

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Not_an_Owl
04/20/12 3:11:00 PM
#29:


Huh. I won. That's neat.

I don't really have an idea for this just yet, but I expect I'll be able to come up with something.

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Natwaf_akidna
04/21/12 6:23:00 PM
#30:


Up

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Pram_the_Oracle
04/22/12 9:09:00 AM
#31:


Damn. Almost halfway through the word quota and it's not ADVENTURE TIME yet. Too much buildup I guess. Oh well, finish it first and squeeze it to fit later. At least I decided on a tolerable opening.

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Pram_the_Oracle
04/23/12 8:47:00 AM
#32:


Up.

So. How's everybody doing?

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_Carlemagne_
04/23/12 8:51:00 AM
#33:


I have finals starting this week. I'm most likely not going to work on this a lot before then.

For that matter though I do have like a page done. >.>

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catastrophy15
04/23/12 8:52:00 AM
#34:


I'm still working on it.

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Blind Azathoth
04/23/12 7:39:00 PM
#35:


I'm not sure this thing I'm writing even really counts as an adventure. But who cares, eh?

Well, probably Sir Chris does. But who else cares, eh?

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Natwaf_akidna
04/23/12 7:44:00 PM
#36:


Well, the definition I got was that it involves activities with risk, danger, or excitement.

As long as it hits one of those, I'll pass it for the prompt requirement.

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edwardsdv
04/23/12 7:50:00 PM
#37:


From: GenesisSaga | #025
edwards only got 3rd? Psh. You people don't recognize true talent!

(I'm kidding but I still thought his was the best)


To be honest I am surprised i got 3rd. My work was middling i felt.

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Natwaf_akidna
04/25/12 4:13:00 AM
#38:


*checks 5th*

Oh, the not so comfort food one. Chalk it up to constant average/above average placement I guess.

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Blind Azathoth
04/26/12 1:36:00 AM
#39:


Hey, when you say "due April 29th," what time exactly do you mean?

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GenesisSaga
04/26/12 2:11:00 AM
#40:


Are we supposed to make titles for these or are they optional?

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Achromatic
04/26/12 3:08:00 AM
#41:


You have all day on the 29th to finish.

Titles are optional.

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Pram_the_Oracle
04/26/12 7:59:00 AM
#42:


... ahh, **** it, there's no way I can condense this Space Opera into a coherent story under 4000 words.

Still, I do have a backup idea to fall on. Should be finished soon.

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GenesisSaga
04/26/12 8:09:00 AM
#43:


^You could always submit the over 4000 words essay as a Leisure Entry since it would be dq'd from the actual competition. Honestly I'm probably not going to read it though. Doesn't sound like my cup of tea.

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Pram_the_Oracle
04/26/12 8:13:00 AM
#44:


... oh, yeah, that's right. Jeff wanted to put in a joke entry, but the others were so godawful his doesn't stand out. Welp, at least the story doesn't go to waste.

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Pram_the_Oracle
04/27/12 11:07:00 AM
#45:


FINISHED!

... is what I would say, if this thing was within the word limit. I thought it was going to be shorter than this. Man I'm a windbag. At least it wasn't as long as the Space Opera one.

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Pram_the_Oracle
04/28/12 2:54:00 AM
#46:


Done editing and sent.

1500+ words cut off. Hope it still makes sense. Oh well.

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Achromatic
04/28/12 2:58:00 AM
#47:


First entry in you guys like to cut it close huh.

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Pram_the_Oracle
04/28/12 3:02:00 AM
#48:


Mine was first? And I thought I'm the slowest writer here >_>

What are the odds that it'll be the only one?

*gets ready to be torn to shreds by everybody*

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Pram_the_Oracle
04/29/12 8:43:00 AM
#49:


>_>

<_<

>_>



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GenesisSaga
04/29/12 8:52:00 AM
#50:


Pretty good, considering my internet magically decided to stop working today. >_>

I'll have to save my story on a Flash drive and transfer it I guess.

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