Board 8 > Help me improve this poster, B8?

(+) Yeah! (+)

It's kinda messy...


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Oh, I am one yet many.

Make it look more like a ?

If you make the words curve, I think it'd look better than trying to do it with a bunch of straight words.

I don't see why "DO" is capitalized but maybe this is some art decision that I'm too silly to understand.

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No amount of planning will ever replace dumb luck.

I concur, make the words curve to resemble a better question mark. And if there's no reason for that DO to be capitalized, then lowercase it. Or make all the words uppercase.

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Something like this?



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Oh, I am one yet many.

This?

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Oh, I am one yet many.

Is there a reason you changed could to can. It might be less cramped, but it's weird to say.

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Connecticut Huskies

Eh, didn't even realize that!

Let's see...

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Oh, I am one yet many.

It needs to be "could," not "can," because could goes with would.

The second version looks much nicer with the curviness. I'd suggest trying a sans serif font (like Arial or Calibri) to give it a bolder look.

Edit: Ninja'd with new version. The red looks nice.


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Something like this?

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Oh, I am one yet many.

It kinda looks more like a hook now tough orz.

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Oh, I am one yet many.

Move everything down a little bit
Have the circular part curve just a wee bit faster so that there's a longer vertical line (hopefully that makes sense)

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I like that. Some more nitpicky comments though:
- The question mark should be centered. Right now it's too near the top.
- I don't really care for the bendy effect on "rewind time."
- To me, it feels kind of weird not to have a question mark on the end, even though I know the whole thing is the question mark. I dunno. What does everyone else think about this?


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I'll review it again later, gotta study for a physics exam for now. Thanks, everyone!

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Oh, I am one yet many.

Maybe you could try to make the end of "would" bigger, so that it connects better with the next word, and so on. That could make it more smooth.

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Am I the only one that thought you were talking about someone who posts here and could use some improvement?

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So here's the final products (might still change them though)



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Oh, I am one yet many.

read title as "Help me improve this B8 poster" and thought this topic was about trying to get MWE to leave the board forever

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ya right you are case the sunglasses have 3d so i can see right threw their clothes -ertyu
(about wearing sunglasses to stare at boobs without girls noticing)

That would be kind of hard.

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Oh, I am one yet many.

The "rewind" looks a bit tiny, but I am not sure what to suggest about that since it's a longer word than "time" and all. Maybe adding the question mark to "time" might balance it out a bit better so you could enlarge "rewind"?

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Poster #2 is cute. The only change I'd make is shifting the spotlight so that it's in the center of "Rewind time" and the mouse, instead of just being centered on the mouse.


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