It needs to be "could," not "can," because could goes with would.
The second version looks much nicer with the curviness. I'd suggest trying a sans serif font (like Arial or Calibri) to give it a bolder look.
Edit: Ninja'd with new version. The red looks nice.
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You put your RESOLVE HAT back on, which conveniently is the same hat as your NORMAL HAT.
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