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TopicCan any "real" pianists check this song I wrote out?
adjl
11/02/20 9:08:34 AM
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Lokarin posted...
My opinion was almost the opposite - like if after a loop or so a reed flute would kick in

Yeah, it could use more of a melody/descant line. Nothing too complex, rhythmically (in fact, you'd probably be best off with just throwing a few whole note chords in), but a little something to give it some more depth. I agree that the bass line doesn't necessarily need to move so much, especially with the drums, but just looping like that is a little dull.

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