Your latest edit will probably do the trick. Maybe you could point out a particular quote from the review (I remember liking the "more variety than two Sonic-games" one or whatever ended the review), but otherwise it's good!
How all have you gone about getting exposure for Chester though? I'll probably start a campaign to get more exposure for a play I wrote about video games soon, so I'd be curious about any advice you may have.
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Nominate SuperNiceDog's Guru-choice, then Epona.