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W_S_C_M
10/17/23 9:38:01 AM
#1:


Shooting for like a dark lounge noir type feel with it.(whenever the f that means)
Let me know what you think of it plz.

https://on.soundcloud.com/pkK35

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W_S_C_M
10/18/23 8:50:44 AM
#2:


Bump

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ArtiRock
10/18/23 8:56:45 AM
#3:


7/10 I think it lacks a strong melody overall, I think.
Would be appropriate background music for a scene that has a somber moment however.

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FF_Redux
10/18/23 9:00:59 AM
#4:


I liked it, it was a bit chaotic in the middle but the melody part at thr start and end was great. Could finetune the middle part to feel more jazzy, doesnt need a strong melody as I still like a bit of the chaos.

8/10

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ai123
10/18/23 9:06:49 AM
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Needs more jazzy. It's a bit too sparse for a cocktail lounge.

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toreysback
10/18/23 9:17:25 AM
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the melody is nice. the left hand needs more to do

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wesastro911
10/18/23 10:03:58 AM
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1:10 - 1:20 part I really like. Could expand on that theme and make some variations
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W_S_C_M
10/19/23 8:51:20 AM
#8:


Thanks for listening and final bump

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boomgetchopped3
10/19/23 8:54:01 AM
#9:


Pretty decent. Good enough for anime end credits with some fine tuning.
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