Current Events > I naturally gravitate towards dark song writing and have trouble breaking that

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Smackems
01/26/23 3:51:29 PM
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Trying to write a love song for my gf for Valentine's but keep stalling

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Turtlebread
01/26/23 3:52:42 PM
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your eyes are blue because they are blue

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sabin017
01/26/23 3:54:30 PM
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what makes it dark?

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Smackems
01/26/23 3:54:59 PM
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Turtlebread posted...
your eyes are blue because they are blue
Your eyes are blue

And when I forget you

That's the first thing that'll leave

This mangled mind, dangling from a memory tree

See can't do it

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Smackems
01/26/23 3:55:35 PM
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[LFAQs-redacted-quote]

They done did that shit

sabin017 posted...
what makes it dark?
Fuckin nothin except me

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Lost_All_Senses
01/26/23 3:57:22 PM
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Make it sexual and see if the same thing happens.

It's not gonna help you, I just think it'll be funny.

Also, try to add in my (stolen) "bust a nut" melody. Women love that.

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AloneIBreak
01/26/23 4:01:21 PM
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You can do a dark love song. If she understands you, really, it'll be fine. Don't try to be something you're not.

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Smackems
01/26/23 4:01:33 PM
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Lost_All_Senses posted...
Make it sexual and see if the same thing happens.

It's not gonna help you, I just think it'll be funny.

Also, try to add in my (stolen) "bust a nut" melody. Women love that.
When your vagina met my penis

It was love at first contact

Years later, decided to leave for the missus

Ripped up the marriage contract

Fuck

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Lost_All_Senses
01/26/23 7:56:16 PM
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Smackems posted...
When your vagina met my penis

It was love at first contact

Years later, decided to leave for the missus

Ripped up the marriage contract

Fuck

Did you guys meet at an orgy? The way it starts sounds like your penis and her vagina met before anything else. And does "it was love at first contact" mean you busted before you could penetrate?

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Heartomaton
01/26/23 8:00:16 PM
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Then write a dark love song ffs gdi

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KiwiTerraRizing
01/26/23 8:01:51 PM
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Fire, fire, fire on my brain!

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Giant_Aspirin
01/26/23 8:05:38 PM
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did someone say 'dark love song'?

It's been over 30 days I've not received your letter
My fingernails are chewed down to the bone
So many different ways I've tried to say I'm sorry
While I'm left here in this 8 by 10 alone

It's not the four walls moving in that tortures me
It's not the cold cement or shivers down my spine
It's just them visions in my head that make me paranoid
And wonder if when I get out will you be mine

I never should have treated you so bad my love I'm sorry
I'm broken I can see that now it's true
My picket fence has turned to razor wire and now I'm awaiting trial
For things you have to know I did not do

If I could get a word with you I'd be just fine
Or any envelope with both your name and mine
Would be enough to keep me going
In a world where I'm left knowing that
There's something more to live for just outside

Seems like the last time, Feels like the first
Though I've had bad days this has to be my worst
I'm left thinking of you dear
While I'm waiting here

I haven't seen the sun since it rested on your shoulder
While we walked along that vacant riverside
They carried me away to a place where I'll get older
If I cannot prove to them you never died


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