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https://voca.ro/1o2KZc11E23X

It goes verse, verse then chorus.

I want a bridge or something and not satisfied that the chorus is too similar to thr verse.

Capo 5 with, Am, Dm, E7 on the verse. F, E7, Am on the chorus.

7/10 too many na's

But joking aside, it's alright. I don't really know what I'd rate it. There's a note that you don't quite hold at around 1:56, but that was probably just a blunder.

How long have you been playing and singing?

GATTJT posted...

7/10 too many na's

But joking aside, it's alright. I don't really know what I'd rate it. There's a note that you don't quite hold at around 1:56, but that was probably just a blunder.

How long have you been playing and singing?

Yeah I noticed the blunder as I recorded but cba to re-record, I like to sing with a high voice, but the higher notes are still hard.

A couple of years but I dont practice as much as I prob should.

I think Im good at creating melodies, I have about 13 work in progress melodies atm. I have 0 talents in writing lyrics tho. Im slowly learning guitarr, I still havent gotten barr chords in my muscle memory and I dont know jack about single notes (fingerpicking) on guitarr.

FF_Redux posted...

Yeah I noticed the blunder as I recorded but cba to re-record

Fair enough

FF_Redux posted...

A couple of years but I dont practice as much as I prob should

Hmm, well how often do you practice? How long per practice session? Not trying to be an ass and pry or anything, just curious.

FF_Redux posted...

Im slowly learning guitarr, I still havent gotten barr chords in my muscle memory and I dont know jack about single notes (fingerpicking) on guitarr.

Barre chords are definitely tough. I need to start practicing again, I sold all my guitars off and only recently got another one.

GATTJT posted...

Fair enough

Hmm, well how often do you practice? How long per practice session? Not trying to be an ass and pry or anything, just curious.

Barre chords are definitely tough. I need to start practicing again, I sold all my guitars off and only recently got another one.

Depends on my mood, sometimes daily, sometimes once every other week.

Also one reason why my voice isnt as good is cuz I cant do things too loud since I gotta be quiet in my appartment after 10pm and its almost 1pm soon. I need to able to relax and sing as loud as I want to be more in tune.

I know how to do barre chords, its just I avoid them if I can so I dont get the muscle memory. I almost have Bm in my muscle memory tho. With F I use the non barre version, it works but doesnt sound as good.

Here is another one, voice isnt that good but you get the gist of it.

https://voca.ro/1hqn01gRvOUd

Capo 3. C, Am, C, Am, G7, C, E7, Am for the verse. F, C, E7, Am, F, C, G7, Am for the chorus.
Dm, C, E7 Am for the bridge or whatever before the final chorus.

Also I know almost nothing about music theory I just do whatever sounds good to me.

Different players are going to take songs in different directions

Establish something that's definitively you, then go from there.

This can be a style, a song, an idea, a technique, a sound, etc

And the rest will come :)

Xethuminra posted...

Different players are going to take songs in different directions

Establish something that's definitively you, then go from there.

This can be a style, a song, an idea, a technique, a sound, etc

And the rest will come :)

I think I have a style to my melodies allready. Most are in minor but I have a couple in major as well. I wish I could write lyrics though but I suck at that.

Inb4

Youll figure it out :)