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United_World 03/06/22 10:48:45 PM #1: |
https://i.imgur.com/PaGRKtT.png The one on the right is a newer version. Am I showing any improvement as a drawin' person? --- http://i.imgur.com/mwMPvDI.gifv http://i.imgur.com/XdPFPMC.gifv ... Copied to Clipboard!
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BlackHorse6969 03/06/22 10:49:36 PM #2: |
Left --- http://i.imgur.com/dMnyy10.jpg ... Copied to Clipboard!
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RedLuigi 03/06/22 10:49:45 PM #3: |
The second one --- It's-a-me! Green Mario! _Stuff_ posted "I love u red Luigi girl" ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Ricemills 03/06/22 10:51:19 PM #4: |
the left one has character right one feels a cleaner, simplified version --- You have the right to remain silent. Anything you posted will be misquoted, then be used against you. http://error1355.com/ce/Ricemills.html ... Copied to Clipboard!
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PMarth2002 03/06/22 11:17:46 PM #5: |
The facial expression on the left one is a little more interesting, everything else about the second one looks slightly better. --- They have taken untold millions that they never toiled to earn But without our brain and muscle not a single wheel can turn ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Master_Bass 03/06/22 11:19:32 PM #6: |
My first instinct was the right one, but I do like the style of the left and the darker outline. --- Many Bothans died to bring you this post. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Nukazie 03/06/22 11:20:14 PM #7: |
left --- Life is just a journey from the maternity ward to the crematorium. https://imgur.com/a/LEjr0RZ waifu courtesy of bnui_ransder ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Kombucha 03/06/22 11:20:35 PM #8: |
The right one. --- http://www.last.fm/user/walkingishonest ... Copied to Clipboard!
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TeaMilk 03/06/22 11:22:33 PM #9: |
The one on the right I think. It's kinda stiff, but the face is much better constructed, and the anatomy looks less wonky --- (they/them) | http://large.horse/ Show Icons on posts: https://openuserjs.org/scripts/melon/GameFAQs_Show_Icon ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Irony 03/06/22 11:24:41 PM #10: |
The first one because it's smug --- I am Mogar, God of Irony and The Devourer of Topics. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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LostForest 03/06/22 11:31:20 PM #11: |
The one on right is more technically proficient, but less interesting. The one on the left is imperfect, but has way better style/personality. I like the original better. --- http://poorcouplesfoodguide.com Agender, curry fan, Top 10 lister, indie dev, gym hitter, musician, et al. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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SiO4 03/06/22 11:33:25 PM #12: |
I like them both. It entirely depends on what you are going for. --- "Whatever the reason you're on Mars, I'm glad you're there, and I wish I was with you." ~Carl Sagan. Currently playing: Flight Simulator X.~PC ... Copied to Clipboard!
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TotallyNotAGirl 03/06/22 11:35:42 PM #13: |
The head too big tho --- You haven't set a signature for the message boards yet ... Copied to Clipboard!
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United_World 03/06/22 11:56:51 PM #14: |
Very interesting. I love the varying opinions! I didn't think the one on the left would get much love because it looks really off to me in certain ways. --- http://i.imgur.com/mwMPvDI.gifv http://i.imgur.com/XdPFPMC.gifv ... Copied to Clipboard!
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FabIe 03/07/22 12:01:57 AM #15: |
The right one is better but I agree about the stiffness. The anatomy is a lot better and the linework is cleaner. If you subtly curved your line of action you'll get a more dynamic pose without losing anything. The left one's expression gives more character. I'm getting a spunkier vibe. --- Spirits sing of a powerful creature that rules over all that is mystic. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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SiO4 03/07/22 12:02:04 AM #16: |
United_World posted... Very interesting. I love the varying opinions! I didn't think the one on the left would get much love because it looks really off to me in certain ways. They are both really nice. I guess on the left she looks more street. She's done this before...but to survive. On the right, she seems to be ready, but more so for a tournament. --- "Whatever the reason you're on Mars, I'm glad you're there, and I wish I was with you." ~Carl Sagan. Currently playing: Flight Simulator X.~PC ... Copied to Clipboard!
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viewmaster_pi 03/07/22 12:04:04 AM #17: |
the left is more subtly stylized, intended or not, but i like the face of right more --- Lying in the cold, I feel right at home ... Copied to Clipboard!
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FarmDog 03/07/22 12:06:37 AM #18: |
Depends on the characters personality. If shes quirky and soft then the left. If shes serious and tough then the right. --- wuewuewuewuewuewue onetreeplanted.org | teamseas.org ... Copied to Clipboard!
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United_World 03/07/22 12:11:46 AM #19: |
viewmaster_pi posted... the left is more subtly stylized, intended or not, but i like the face of right moreThe idea for the left was that she's tough, yet kind of nervous. A true novice. Then I went over it again with the right, making a version where her body language is more seasoned and focused. --- http://i.imgur.com/mwMPvDI.gifv http://i.imgur.com/XdPFPMC.gifv ... Copied to Clipboard!
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SiO4 03/07/22 12:22:54 AM #20: |
United_World posted...
That's klinda what I see. --- "Whatever the reason you're on Mars, I'm glad you're there, and I wish I was with you." ~Carl Sagan. Currently playing: Flight Simulator X.~PC ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Returning_CEmen 03/07/22 1:07:53 AM #21: |
right but she needs more curves --- Genius, Thousandaire, Playboy, Philanthropist ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Guerrilla Soldier 03/07/22 1:15:01 AM #22: |
the posture of the left one is actually more organic and the weight feels bouncy. she has attitude and spunk. but at the same time, it's the stylistically unique one. every character and the world around would have to match that design and attitude. the right one feels more generic in the sense that it would fit more into a broader range of styles. the posture, though, feels more like a tracing and less like a real person. it feels "safer". interesting note, if it were a cartoon, i'd expect the left one to have more fluid animation and the right to be choppier. --- Disclaimer: There's a good chance the above post could be sarcasm. Die-hard Oakland A's fan --- Keep the A's in Oakland! ... Copied to Clipboard!
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United_World 03/07/22 7:52:25 PM #23: |
interesting note, if it were a cartoon, i'd expect the left one to have more fluid animation and the right to be choppier.This is a super interesting note. I get exactly what you mean when you put it that way. --- http://i.imgur.com/mwMPvDI.gifv http://i.imgur.com/XdPFPMC.gifv ... Copied to Clipboard!
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SiO4 03/08/22 1:33:02 AM #24: |
I still like more left more, as it seems like someone I would have been more likely to be friends with. Right is cool....but I feel she just took some classes. Either way, quality topic ....And Bump! --- "Whatever the reason you're on Mars, I'm glad you're there, and I wish I was with you." ~Carl Sagan. Currently playing: Flight Simulator X.~PC ... Copied to Clipboard!
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TentacleDemon 03/08/22 1:37:26 AM #25: |
The one on the right looks better. The one on the left looks like a very awkward stance with the feet turned in and her right arm/shoulder. The head and face just seem a little off as well. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Arcanine2009 03/08/22 1:38:00 AM #26: |
let's expressions are nicer, but the head is a tad bit big. --- Less is more. Everything you want, isn't everything you need. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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United_World 03/08/22 8:20:17 PM #27: |
SiO4 posted... I still like more left more, as it seems like someone I would have been more likely to be friends with.Thanks, I appreciate it. I usually work all day, so I'm constantly coming off and on to this topic. But it has made me want to get into the habit of going back and re-doing old drawings. Especially ones that I can't stand to look at anymore ha. --- http://i.imgur.com/mwMPvDI.gifv http://i.imgur.com/XdPFPMC.gifv ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Rioushu 03/08/22 8:22:03 PM #28: |
PMarth2002 posted... The facial expression on the left one is a little more interesting, everything else about the second one looks slightly better. --- engligh ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Lokison 03/08/22 8:36:53 PM #29: |
The left one has more character to it. The right one looks like you may have tried to hard. Both look good though. --- Word from the wise: Don't run in the shower. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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KayfabeTactics 03/08/22 8:38:58 PM #30: |
The one on the right --- http://i.imgur.com/iwDYXu2.jpg http://i.imgur.com/ijkbcyX.jpg http://i.imgur.com/StztuJe.jpg http://i.imgur.com/XHBVXsI.jpg ... Copied to Clipboard!
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United_World 03/08/22 9:50:30 PM #31: |
Here's another one. The second one I did just now. Old: https://i.imgur.com/e49Oi6y.jpg New: https://i.imgur.com/WdIJs3f.jpg --- http://i.imgur.com/mwMPvDI.gifv http://i.imgur.com/XdPFPMC.gifv ... Copied to Clipboard!
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SiO4 03/08/22 9:52:29 PM #32: |
United_World posted...
Your welcome...also after seeing that last pic, I have to ask, were you the one that made the CEgal a while ago. ((More than a year at this point)) --- "Whatever the reason you're on Mars, I'm glad you're there, and I wish I was with you." ~Carl Sagan. Currently playing: Flight Simulator X.~PC ... Copied to Clipboard!
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televigilante 03/08/22 9:53:44 PM #33: |
both cool, but the left one is standing kinda funny. Her knees are pointing inward. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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United_World 03/08/22 9:57:58 PM #34: |
SiO4 posted... Your welcome...also after seeing that last pic, I have to ask, were you the one that made the CEgal a while ago. ((More than a year at this point))Yep. That's me. --- http://i.imgur.com/mwMPvDI.gifv http://i.imgur.com/XdPFPMC.gifv ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Wii_Shaker 03/08/22 9:59:30 PM #35: |
Left has more flavor. Right has better dimensions. edit: Agree about the curves. Needs more. --- "He busted in, blessed be the Lord Who believe any mess they read up on a message board" -MF DOOM 1970-2020 (G.O.A.T.) ... Copied to Clipboard!
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United_World 03/08/22 10:15:52 PM #36: |
Wii_Shaker posted... Left has more flavor. Right has better dimensions.Define curves in this context, because the character in the OP is supposed to be a kid. Or at least I hope I did a good enough job of making her look like a kid. --- http://i.imgur.com/mwMPvDI.gifv http://i.imgur.com/XdPFPMC.gifv ... Copied to Clipboard!
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SiO4 03/08/22 10:20:44 PM #37: |
United_World posted...
Haha, I can see the art style now!! --- "Whatever the reason you're on Mars, I'm glad you're there, and I wish I was with you." ~Carl Sagan. Currently playing: Flight Simulator X.~PC ... Copied to Clipboard!
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United_World 03/08/22 10:38:45 PM #38: |
SiO4 posted... Haha, I can see the art style now!!I'm happy that I have a distinguishable style for you! I'm always trying to get better with my cartoony drawings in my free time. --- http://i.imgur.com/mwMPvDI.gifv http://i.imgur.com/XdPFPMC.gifv ... Copied to Clipboard!
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mooreandrew58 03/08/22 10:46:43 PM #39: |
Face hair and torso on the right. Otherwise the left --- Cid- "looks like that overgrown lobster just got served!" Bartz-"with cheese biscuts AND mashed potatoes!" ... Copied to Clipboard!
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SiO4 03/08/22 10:57:01 PM #40: |
United_World posted...
You are doing good! It took me a sec to see it, but sure enough!! https://imgur.com/ZipX3WS --- "Whatever the reason you're on Mars, I'm glad you're there, and I wish I was with you." ~Carl Sagan. Currently playing: Flight Simulator X.~PC ... Copied to Clipboard!
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United_World 03/08/22 11:51:11 PM #41: |
The best of both worlds? https://i.imgur.com/DDsmyEW.jpg --- http://i.imgur.com/mwMPvDI.gifv http://i.imgur.com/XdPFPMC.gifv ... Copied to Clipboard!
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NeonOctopus 03/08/22 11:54:13 PM #42: |
I know I'm late but right looks better --- http://i.imgur.com/nlaY1qH.jpg http://i.imgur.com/zHJ1OCo.gif http://i.imgur.com/btBPP4E.jpg http://i.imgur.com/1B3bMHw.gif https://i.imgur.com/2aof3ao.jpg ... Copied to Clipboard!
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SiO4 03/09/22 12:29:02 AM #43: |
Ya, that is a nice middle ground! Keep it up, you'er good!! --- "Whatever the reason you're on Mars, I'm glad you're there, and I wish I was with you." ~Carl Sagan. Currently playing: Flight Simulator X.~PC ... Copied to Clipboard!
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