Current Events > Y'all wanna listen to the song I made

(+) Yeah! (+)

https://youtu.be/Fxwp6mVjz0s

Theres still some tweaking to do but its coming along

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nicholasthongsong

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Well thats one way of looking at it :)

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Pretty good. I like your voice and you have good melodies.
I liked the keys bit in the middle.
You playing a 12 string for it?

The only thing I didn't like was the beat. It feels like when it drops it should be more present. What you put almost felt like a tease.

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Eat More Beef posted...

Pretty good. I like your voice and you have good melodies.
I liked the keys bit in the middle.
You playing a 12 string for it?

The only thing I didn't like was the beat. It feels like when it drops it should be more present. What you put almost felt like a tease.

Nah but the guitar is double tracked so it has a bit of a chorus effect.

What Im noticing is it loses the tight sense of urgency the demo version had; Ill try tweaking the volume of the percussion and see if that gives it more presence. Maybe some slap back delay on the snaps/claps since the mix is pretty dry

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ShyOx posted...

Nah but the guitar is double tracked so it has a bit of a chorus effect.

What Im noticing is it loses the tight sense of urgency the demo version had; Ill try tweaking the volume of the percussion and see if that gives it more presence. Maybe some slap back delay on the snaps/claps since the mix is pretty dry

Yeah, it could be just in need of a volune increase is all.

Got any more tunes you've dropped?

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