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Snakebone99
04/30/21 5:30:20 AM
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I didn't mean for it to look like Angelina Jolie
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spikethedevil
04/30/21 5:31:41 AM
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Thats pretty damn cool.

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Snakebone99
04/30/21 5:33:11 AM
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spikethedevil posted...
Thats pretty damn cool.

Thanks!! I just started drawing. I never thought I could do it, but I have visualized doing it for years. Maybe that helped.
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Wii_Shaker
04/30/21 5:36:10 AM
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I like how dynamic that pose is. I like what you did with the hair.

Hair is really tricky and tedious to draw and I think you did a good job with the face. She's way cuter than Angelina, btw.

I can't help but feel that the face has lots of attention put into the detail but the body, though the dimensions are great, seem kind of rushed and unfinished.

I like it overall.

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Kakapo
04/30/21 5:37:40 AM
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Very awesome! Nice work!

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Snakebone99
04/30/21 5:37:42 AM
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Wii_Shaker posted...
I like how dynamic that pose is. I like what you did with the hair.

Hair is really tricky and tedious to draw and I think you did a good job with the face. She's way cuter than Angelina, btw.

I can't help but feel that the face has lots of attention put into the detail but the body, thought the dimensions are great, seem kind of rushed and unfinished.

I like it overall.

I was just practicing a face, and it turned out so good, I added the body. So yeah, it was kind of an add on.
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kirbyakaZ
04/30/21 5:43:34 AM
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I really like it! The body is a bit stiff, especially the arms, but the face and hair are great.
I also see you cheating on the hands, don't do that to yourself. I know you were practicing with faces, but if you struggle with hands it's all the more reason to do them constantly!


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Wii_Shaker
04/30/21 5:44:57 AM
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kirbyakaZ posted...
I know you were practicing with faces, but if you struggle with hands it's all the more reason to do them constantly!
Good advice.

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Snakebone99
04/30/21 5:47:06 AM
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kirbyakaZ posted...
I really like it! The body is a bit stiff, especially the arms, but the face and hair are great.
I also see you cheating on the hands, don't do that to yourself. I know you were practicing with faces, but if you struggle with hands it's all the more reason to do them constantly!

Yeah, I'm a rookie for real, I'm amazed I drew this. I need to practice everything
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kirbyakaZ
04/30/21 5:50:12 AM
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Snakebone99 posted...
Yeah, I'm a rookie for real, I'm amazed I drew this. I need to practice everything

Are you going to do digital or just hand drawn?

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Snakebone99
04/30/21 5:55:06 AM
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kirbyakaZ posted...
Are you going to do digital or just hand drawn?

For now just pencil and paper. I'm just going to practice like this for while. I struggle with basic stuff, I might upgrade if I can improve.
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Snakebone99
04/30/21 6:17:05 AM
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I really enjoy practicing Wonder Woman. Her body shapes are sharp. I really need practice on faces, know any good online stuff? YouTube videos or even actual classes? I think I'm good enough and green enough to absorb a bunch.

I get stuck at places like this.

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kirbyakaZ
04/30/21 6:19:11 AM
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https://bit.ly/3nzy1rc
(Gamefaqs hated this url)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IyuCq6VWVeA

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iqvFjJTIJx8

https://youtu.be/45y275C-NJU

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iLIjD-5AgWU

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NGROGrDpC5M

Here are some hand picked tutorials for you, enjoy! =]

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awesome999
04/30/21 6:19:21 AM
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Huh that's actually really good
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Snakebone99
04/30/21 6:21:33 AM
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@KIRBYAKAZ

Thank you! I'd like to actually practice this with intent. I found a hidden skill!! That's exciting
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kirbyakaZ
04/30/21 6:39:16 AM
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Snakebone99 posted...
@KIRBYAKAZ

Thank you! I'd like to actually practice this with intent. I found a hidden skill!! That's exciting

I hope it helps! Please feel free to @ me any time for future critique, or if you want a pipeline to get you good at Krita!


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Snakebone99
04/30/21 12:25:32 PM
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New day, more opinions?
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_MorningStar
04/30/21 12:28:47 PM
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Returning_CEmen
04/30/21 12:31:26 PM
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The flowing hair was done really well. I like it

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SpaceBear_
04/30/21 12:33:45 PM
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Looks excellent, my dude.

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Pus_N_Pecans
04/30/21 12:44:02 PM
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The whole torso looks great. Not bad!

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Snakebone99
04/30/21 1:37:54 PM
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Pus_N_Pecans posted...
The whole torso looks great. Not bad!
Thank you! I'm still practicing.


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kirbyakaZ
04/30/21 3:36:11 PM
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Snakebone99 posted...
Thank you! I'm still practicing.


The pose is fun, and not too far off for a comic book cover. That said, the anatomy is super off. How critical would you like us to be?

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Snakebone99
04/30/21 4:35:57 PM
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kirbyakaZ posted...
The pose is fun, and not too far off for a comic book cover. That said, the anatomy is super off. How critical would you like us to be?

Super critical. I was trying to practice stuff from those videos. The force line stuff
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nemu
04/30/21 4:41:43 PM
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Arm could definitely use the most work. I'd make sure to have at least a small portion of the hidden arm on-page, else it can look a little weird. Hair and face seem a little off compared to the style of the body for some reason. Definitely good practice regardless though.
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kirbyakaZ
04/30/21 6:08:25 PM
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Snakebone99 posted...
Super critical. I was trying to practice stuff from those videos. The force line stuff

I'm glad!

So anatomy is huge for line work and people.
I strongly recommend before you draw a pose to get up and try to act it out, even take a picture of yourself if you can!
You'll feel silly, but it'll give you a lot of experience about what works and what doesn't very quickly.

Issues:
1. Her neck is way too thick and long
2. Her spine looks broken
3. Her torso is too long.
4. Depending on what's going on in the scene, her boobs would be all wrong. If she's being thrown it's fine, otherwise, they are defying gravity.

One of the videos I linked was all about measurements, you might want to take a look at that soon.

The dynamic poses are super fun, and you clearly are enjoying them, but you might want to try a basic T-Pose or Turn Around first to get the fundamentals of sizing down.

Overall you have some talent and I strongly encourage you to continue!

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Snakebone99
04/30/21 7:32:56 PM
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You mean this is isn't anatomically correct?

I drew a number 2, and turned it into a man being flung.
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Snakebone99
05/02/21 1:49:32 AM
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@kirbyakaZ
Been practicing, and I think realism might be my style.

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Naysaspace
05/02/21 1:54:42 AM
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six point 3 out of 10

its ok, but its a rough sketch. finalize it.

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Snakebone99
05/02/21 1:56:19 AM
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Naysaspace posted...
six point 3 out of 10

its ok, but its a rough sketch. finalize it.

I'm not sure I know how. I've been drawing for maybe 3 days. Of course I doodled growing up, but this is the first time I've actually tried to draw.

So...I'm just kinda winging it.
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kirbyakaZ
05/02/21 2:10:19 AM
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Snakebone99 posted...
@kirbyakaZ
Been practicing, and I think realism might be my style.

I'm glad you're practicing but the proportions are all sorts of wrong.
And if you want realism (which is good! ) then work on shading =]

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Snakebone99
05/02/21 3:41:41 AM
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I dont understand how it always ends up so off. It's like I have never seen a human or something. I use a circle and try to find where things are supposed to go...but it never looks right. Just tried again. I guess I'll get there eventually.
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kirbyakaZ
05/02/21 5:47:13 AM
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Snakebone99 posted...
I dont understand how it always ends up so off. It's like I have never seen a human or something. I use a circle and try to find where things are supposed to go...but it never looks right. Just tried again. I guess I'll get there eventually.

What's your reference look like for comparison?

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SolidShadow3
05/02/21 6:10:56 AM
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kirbyakaZ posted...


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iLIjD-5AgWU

That was great

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Snakebone99
05/02/21 9:16:58 PM
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So I've just been working on putting body parts in the right places. Practicing like crazy. One thing I noticed, is I can do this in much much less time now. So I'm getting more and more time to practice.

Just putting a body in anything but a t-pose requires brain power. I respect people that can draw for real

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twitterfriends
05/02/21 9:20:04 PM
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Smh. I thought you were serious.

You drew Mulan not Wonder Woman

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Snakebone99
05/02/21 9:21:00 PM
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twitterfriends posted...
Smh. I thought you were serious.

You drew Mulan not Wonder Woman

Yeah, I suck. It's really just Wonder Woman's body used as a model
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Kuja_88
05/02/21 11:12:34 PM
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kirbyakaZ posted...
https://bit.ly/3nzy1rc
(Gamefaqs hated this url)

Why because he has a bad technique? Or is it because of the black lives matters protests???


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IyuCq6VWVeA

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iqvFjJTIJx8

https://youtu.be/45y275C-NJU

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iLIjD-5AgWU

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NGROGrDpC5M

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Damn_Underscore
05/02/21 11:15:13 PM
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TC do you make... dirty drawings?

Your ability is impressive for real, I could never come close to this

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MabusIncarnate
05/02/21 11:17:45 PM
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I think you'd benefit more off of pencil pressure. Like eyebrows and whatnot. A heavy pull into a lighter pull would give it a more realistic perspective. Not at all being critical, but when it comes to stuff like shading and realism, when it comes down to using graphite, this can make a big difference. I took a few years of art in college, and on top of pencil art, I used a lot of charcoal, and how soft or hard you are pressing can be a tremendous difference. Don't take this as negative at all, it's just advice. You have talent as a beginner and everyone starts somewhere. I think with work and practice you can create some amazing things. I like what you've posted so far.

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skermac
05/02/21 11:18:23 PM
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Basic but cool

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Snakebone99
05/02/21 11:28:16 PM
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MabusIncarnate posted...
I think you'd benefit more off of pencil pressure. Like eyebrows and whatnot. A heavy pull into a lighter pull would give it a more realistic perspective. Not at all being critical, but when it comes to stuff like shading and realism, when it comes down to using graphite, this can make a big difference. I took a few years of art in college, and on top of pencil art, I used a lot of charcoal, and how soft or hard you are pressing can be a tremendous difference. Don't take this as negative at all, it's just advice. You have talent as a beginner and everyone starts somewhere. I think with work and practice you can create some amazing things. I like what you've posted so far.

Thanks!! One day I might buy actual supplies. I'm just using a basic Bic mechanical pencil. Should I get proper supplies? Am I teaching myself bad habits?

I really don't know why I'm shading and stuff when I'm really just practicing building a body and face. Just putting things where they are supposed to go. It's all just boxes, tubes, and circles put in different places. I'm truly a beginner, but my mind doesn't get so confused anymore when constructing
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Snakebone99
05/02/21 11:29:00 PM
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Damn_Underscore posted...
TC do you make... dirty drawings?

Your ability is impressive for real, I could never come close to this

No, but I will one day. Those poses would be fun to draw.
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Damn_Underscore
05/02/21 11:29:30 PM
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Snakebone99 posted...
No, but I will one day. Those poses would be fun to draw.

nice

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RedJackson
05/02/21 11:29:54 PM
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Snakebone99 posted...
So I've just been working on putting body parts in the right places. Practicing like crazy. One thing I noticed, is I can do this in much much less time now. So I'm getting more and more time to practice.

Just putting a body in anything but a t-pose requires brain power. I respect people that can draw for real

Dayum, that's awesome and the work shows

Respect


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MabusIncarnate
05/02/21 11:32:11 PM
#46:


Snakebone99 posted...
Thanks!! One day I might buy actual supplies. I'm just using a basic Bic mechanical pencil. Should I get proper supplies? Am I teaching myself bad habits?

I really don't know why I'm shading and stuff when I'm really just practicing building a body and face. Just putting things where they are supposed to go. It's all just boxes, tubes, and circles put in different places. I'm truly a beginner, but my mind doesn't get so confused anymore when constructing
You absolutely have something here with diameters, perspective, life-likeness. Your first pic in this topic shows a bit of emotion, and that is really hard to do when drawing people. You have talent, it's just raw. Your ratios are on point, a lot of time body to head comparison is way off. It looks like a legitimate rough sketch for a comic book. I was nowhere close to this when I started. I appreciate you sharing. Stick with it!

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kirbyakaZ
05/03/21 9:24:02 AM
#47:


Snakebone99 posted...
So I've just been working on putting body parts in the right places. Practicing like crazy. One thing I noticed, is I can do this in much much less time now. So I'm getting more and more time to practice.

Just putting a body in anything but a t-pose requires brain power. I respect people that can draw for real

You're getting much better! Keep going and I'm sure you'll become a great artist in no time.

Kuja_88 posted...
Why because he has a bad technique? Or is it because of the black lives matters protests???

Because the YouTube url had 3 letters in it that make up an outdated slur.

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