Current Events > Listen to my song and tell me what you think, CE

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CE legend @RedJackson once described it as good (paraphrased)

obligatory this is a scratch recording, recorded loosely this morning in my bedroom whilst messing around with stuff

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1EVbRNlhkzAG6mAtc3Tm60apinyhRHfSJ/view?usp=drivesdk

Bells of thunder have all rang out, into the once-full sky
Rivers that once ran blue with psalms have been left in the sun to dry
The corner around which your basket lies is now on the other side
Invisible men pull it astray
All theyll allow is their own way
You know youve gotta do what they say
Theres nothing to find, you know theres nowhere to go
The pipers in drag have decided its time to pull the curtains and call the show
Youre caught up on a yellow railroad just outside of Indigo

Inside of her room up on top of the hill, with one too many gloves
Elizabeth lays neath the window, dreaming of her Romeos touch
Waiting to hear from the edge of refrain whether she has laid enough
Who predicts from where it stands
That shell never keep hold of her plans
Before itself removing her hands
Its not hard to see the place she so much wishes to know
Where fields of delivered promises spread as far as they can go
But youre caught up on a yellow railroad just outside of Indigo

You always have known that the night can play tricks but you never figured out how to move
Out to the middle of the raging cold, where youve left your fire to soothe
The feeling that your bandits tail was not all you had to lose
That maybe youve missed the right call
That majesty doesnt fit at all
That youve got no more nails in the wall
If you see Elizabeth on the plateau
Make sure you dont miss the chance to wave and tell her hello
And that youre caught up on a yellow railroad outside of indigo

Startled by chorus lines of blues, I awoke just in time to get dressed
The commissioners ball had started and I knew they would not forget
I sent them a note explaining that my absence was for the best
If not for certain, its for sure
My candelabra is holding the door
Gravitys echo is not lost anymore
Do not send any letters that youve wrote
Do not sing me a melody that I will never know
Im caught up on a yellow railroad just outside of Indigo

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The guitar is pretty good but the vocals not so much.

I really enjoyed the lyrics lol thats some sweet imagery going on too with some of my favorite lines being

Rivers that once ran blue with psalms have been left in the sun to dry

If not for certain, its for sure
My candelabra is holding the door
Gravitys echo is not lost anymore

those stuck out a lot to me, the whole series of songs youve posted so far deserve a BUMP


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