Current Events > Listen to my new song I'm making. What ya think?

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FF_Redux
02/09/21 5:09:06 AM
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https://voca.ro/1b5tvgnnRA6A

Still work in progress, I want real lyrics instead of gibberish. Messed up at the end, was gonna end it with the chorus but whatever.

Also I wonder what genre/influences melodies like this is.

Edit: I noticed I changed some notes on the pre-chorus from what I did yesterday making it sound bit too samey with the chorus, good thing I record myself as its easy to sccidentally change things.

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BlingBling22947
02/09/21 6:10:47 AM
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not bad

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MedeaLysistrata
02/09/21 7:03:07 AM
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Pretty good. Mic picked up everything well. Your singing is nice in this one. Keep on!

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FF_Redux
02/09/21 7:36:42 AM
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BlingBling22947 posted...
not bad

MedeaLysistrata posted...
Pretty good. Mic picked up everything well. Your singing is nice in this one. Keep on!

Thanks. Right now Im trying to find and good notes in the end for the pre-chorus and chorus so it becomes more melodic and less samey. I sometimes find them but forget. Just keep on doing it until I get it.

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FF_Redux
02/09/21 8:17:10 AM
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New take with the changes in melody and tried with my 6 string, I started in too high pitch tho but you still get the melody

https://voca.ro/1asQwzTeJaVY

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