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Ving_Rhames 01/19/21 8:32:36 AM #1:	Writing for feels numba wan. --- the real Irving Rameses https://imgur.com/A7f6F9h <cite>Ving_Rhames posted [p:949670475] in Things in ... [t:79247527]...</cite> <quote>Writing for feels numba wan. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
pegusus123456 01/19/21 8:48:06 AM #2:	It's not super common in published books, but I fucking hate when a first-person narrative describes the narrator by having them look at themselves in a mirror. --- https://imgur.com/Er6TT https://imgur.com/Er6TT https://imgur.com/Er6TT So? I deeded to some gay porn. It doesn't mean anything. - Patty_Fleur <cite>pegusus123456 posted [p:949670769] in Things in ... [t:79247527]...</cite> <quote>It's not super common in published books, but I fucking hate when a first-person narrative describes the narrator by having them look at themselves in a mirror. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
R1masher 01/19/21 8:50:55 AM #3:	They never go to the bathroom or if they do, they make water --- R1R1R1R1R1R1 <cite>R1masher posted [p:949670826] in Things in ... [t:79247527]...</cite> <quote>They never go to the bathroom or if they do, they make water </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
smoke_break 01/19/21 8:59:19 AM #4:	Obvious filler actions just to break up the dialogue. In this one book I read, something like "____ blinked" came before the dialogue. I'm like come on, really bro. https://i.imgur.com/KFRTtVt.gif --- https://imgur.com/mOCFlRv <cite>smoke_break posted [p:949671018] in Things in ... [t:79247527]...</cite> <quote>Obvious filler actions just to break up the dialogue. In this one book I read, something like "____ blinked" came before the dialogue. I'm like come on, really bro. https://i.imgur.com/KFRTtVt.gif </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
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