Current Events > gotta tbh, reviewing other people's creative writing is cringe

Topic List
Page List: 1, 2
#51
Post #51 was unavailable or deleted.
spanky1
10/09/19 12:49:27 PM
#52:


She breasted boobily towards the stairs, and tittied downward.
---
... Copied to Clipboard!
BettyWhite
10/09/19 12:57:07 PM
#53:


Psh. TC must be too good for me. ;-;
---
Life is pain and misery
beat skeet to asian street meat
... Copied to Clipboard!
Doe
10/10/19 7:26:22 PM
#54:


It just occurred to me with this last one that a lot of these people aren't just only here for the gen ed credits but aren't engaging with the textbook with at all or honestly even trying
---
... Copied to Clipboard!
Doe
10/10/19 7:57:46 PM
#55:


and it seems this writer is either an atheist or very god fearing
---
... Copied to Clipboard!
Doe
10/10/19 8:09:47 PM
#56:


Yep, this story's message was just, UGH.

This kid is in a high school in Beverly Hills and is apparently the only poor kid among all the rich. He needs money to feed his siblings so he pick pockets a snobby girl. Immediately afterwards he goes through a huge guilt inner monologue, since apparently he's religious and, even though God has shit on his entire life, Who Is He to steal from someone "he barely knew." He "has better morals than this." So he finds her in the hallway and confesses to stealing it and says he did it because he didn't have money to feed his family. She says she will give him money as long as he "helps his grades." He finds this a great result because "what's helping one more person going to hurt?"
---
... Copied to Clipboard!
Topic List
Page List: 1, 2