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Cocytus
05/30/18 2:41:52 PM
#1:


You talk, Ill sleep.
Life aint no good,
Even with this weed.
Ill wake up and tell you
Everything you need
To know about this world,
How it hurts and doesnt cease.
Then youll wonder why you wondered,
Or ever stopped to think
Why you never understood these things before.
Why you dont feel well no more.
Why youre born to die.
Why youre goanna cry,
About today, tomorrow
And the by and by.
You aint never heard a sound as loud as me
When Im saying nothing in my sleep.
Now I'm out this world.
Peace.
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Turbam
05/30/18 2:43:55 PM
#2:


It's ok
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I'm just one man! Whoa! Well, I'm a one man band! https://imgur.com/p9Xvjvs
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PoopPotato
05/30/18 2:44:00 PM
#3:


Roses are red
Violets are blue
I wrote a cool poem
I made it just for you
Now settle down and say goodnight
It's time now to turn off the light
Get some sleep
Don't say a peep
In your Dreams you'll see
I'm the one who makes you go pee
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Cocytus
05/30/18 2:44:36 PM
#4:


PoopPotato posted...
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I wrote a cool poem
I made it just for you
Now settle down and say goodnight
It's time now to turn off the light
Get some sleep
Don't say a peep
In your Dreams you'll see
I'm the one who makes you go pee

Pretty cool.
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