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MedeaLysistrata
11/04/17 11:32:44 PM
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my main concern is whether i should continue writing in the same style, but any commentary is appreciated
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MedeaLysistrata
11/04/17 11:39:32 PM
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plz
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C_Pain
11/04/17 11:41:03 PM
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What kind of story? maybe ill help
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MedeaLysistrata
11/04/17 11:42:46 PM
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C_Pain posted...
What kind of story? maybe ill help

it's for a serialized web novel, it's just the first post. about 1.5k words. it doesn't really have a central plot, but the first post is about some kids in canadian high school, after the curriculum has recently been changed.
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MedeaLysistrata
11/04/17 11:49:38 PM
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@C_Pain

but maybe you meant something else by 'what kind of story'
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C_Pain
11/04/17 11:53:14 PM
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eh.. i guess i could take a look
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MedeaLysistrata
11/04/17 11:57:01 PM
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