Current Events > When I was like 11-12y old I wrote a kinda disturbing story for English class.

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I don't remember much if it but I'll post what I remember.
It was about this crazy murdered called Bloodskin that escapes prison. And these 2 cops go after him.

They end up at his house, they kick the door down and hear a dripping sound. They find his mother hanging from the ceiling above a bathtub with water and blood was dripping in it, Bloodskin had murdered his mother.

Then stuff happens and Bloodskin ends up with a bazooka and goes on a rampage blowing up buildings and stuff.

I think the cops killed him eventually.

The best part is that I wrote the whole story with some font that had bloody letters and I used red colored letters....

>__>
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Bloodskin going to town with a bazooka feels out of character for who you'd established as someone who deals in blood and skin on a personal level. Lazy character development. C-
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TheJBD posted...

Bloodskin going to town with a bazooka feels out of character for who you'd established as someone who deals in blood and skin on a personal level. Lazy character development. C-

I said stuff happens!

I don't remember what happened tho :(

I wonder if I could find the printed papers somewhere in stuff saved somewhere, doubt it tho.
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I wrote a story in 7th grade about a guy who kills himself and I got into a lot of trouble.
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I honestly don't understand why the teachers didn't react to the weird subject, but I think my English writing was so good at the time for my age that it didn't matter. I dunno...
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FF_Redux posted...

I honestly don't understand why the teachers didn't react to the weird subject, but I think my English writing was so good at the time for my age that it didn't matter. I dunno...

Maybe you had teachers that gave a shit about their profession and encouraged freedom of expression.

Yeah it's a bit of a risque topic for a middle school class, but still.

And then this future slasher writer turned out to be someone who had a thing for old men lol
Honestly, the old man road is a far better road to go on though
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