I guess you're going for a professional voice, but it kind of comes of as... I don't know, cold? Distant? I don't read professional reviews usually because of that, preferring to stick to more "passionate" user reviews.
Besides a few grammatical errors, if that's what you're going for, good job.
Thanks, man, I'll note that. I certainly do not want to come off as cold or distant, as I enjoyed the game immensely. Perhaps one reason is that I'm always doing my best to avoid spoilers. There's also just a lot to be said about Peace Walker and its mechanics, so I guess a greater part of the review was just talking about how they work than in my previous two reviews.
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Cold and distant come off more negative than I what I meant. The best way I can describe it was that it was an "unbiased" review. Like, it's the review of an "objective person X", not the review of "Vlado," if that makes sense.
I see. I'm not aiming to be "unbiased," but I do try to cover most important aspects of the game I'm reviewing. Perhaps that influences the "unbiased" vibe?
...If you've got the time, could you also point out a grammatical error or two that you've spotted?
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Can't you pull your own screenshots? They aren't fair use when they're watermarked, unfortuantely. Though it doesn't look like you sell ads, so that's fine. Work on that SEO, though!
EDIT: Good review though!
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Digi And then God created Saturn, and he liked it, so he put a ring on it.
And yeah, it's a bit of a lame deal with the pics, but the site is still not fully professional (and who knows if it will ever be). I usually try to put ones that are not watermarked, but for some stuff I wanna show, I just can't find any.
Ideally, I'd be taking my own screenshots, of course.
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