~~~Rules and Regulations~~~ -The rapper listed first goes first. -Each rapper must spit a pair of 12 line verses, alternating Rapper A-Rapper B-Rapper A-Rapper B. -24 hour time limit on each rap starts when the previous rap (or the topic itself) is posted -After the final verse has been posted, there will be a 36 hour voting period. Please bold your votes. -You can’t vote on your own match. -As always, keep the player hatin' to a minimum (includes rallying). -Extensions may be allowed on a discretionary basis. -In case of a tie at the end of the voting period, there will be a tiebreaker round. See discussion topic for details.
Swear to god this is the most mannish B**** I ever seen Vag getting soiled year round call it evergreen Couldnt pay a mex to landscape it, Juan more thing eat you in this battle like a p****, lick the plate clean.
You dream of gettin this stick, way sick of toothpicks that dont fit and leave you feeling empty like yo rhymes chick But dont trip, i wont slip, anything in that slit It probably be more fun f****** a cup then your loose s***
My verses are phat, feel pain when they penetrate your cranium gag on mouthfuls of syllables and verbs im slayin em If what I spit were STDs then maybe you could CATCH-it but only cause your nasty you stank whore ratchet.
I feel like you gotta get more creative with your disses. Everything's good and structured well enough, but what cost you against me was the creativity I think. Also try to advance your wordplay a bit more.
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