~~~Rules and Regulations~~~ -The rapper listed first goes first. -Each rapper must spit a pair of 12 line verses, alternating Rapper A-Rapper B-Rapper A-Rapper b. -The first rapper has 24 hours from this post to post their first 12 lines. The second rapper then has 24 hours from the first rapper's post to post their own rap. From there another 24 hours for Rapper A, and from there another 24 hours for rapper B. -After the final verse has been posted, there will be a 36 hour voting period. Please bold your votes. -You cant vote on your own match. -As always, keep the player hatin' to a minimum. -Extensions may be allowed on a discretionary basis. -In case of a tie at the end of the voting period, there will be a tiebreaker round. A new topic will be posted with the 2 raps from each rapper, and each rapper will then be allowed to spit a further 12 line verse, in the same alternating order, followed by another round of voting.
May the best rapper win.
Extha, you may rap when ready.
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Lets start all cylinders fire'n, yes im cummin quick dispose of this clown like sperm that i shot out my dick Its premature for you to battle me man. too soon ill detour cock back and leave your body wet. monsoon
Doom!....you have no hope cause everybody here knows your a MotherF****** joke my rhythms are fantastic, yours are elastic stretch you out on the pavement no need for a casket
Ill keep it blunt you gettin rolled by the Jay Interpret you like a mic check, F*** what you say Smoke you like the herb you are b**** N****. photosynthesis first round knockout and I just X'd tha nemesis
Forcefully replacing that dragon f***** so I can take out the #trashbags This raggedy b**** named jdizz sucks d*** with or without the hashtags. Yo dizz, youre not a pro dancer, youre a liar and a disgrace. I just saw you on Dancing With the Stars under your alias: Nancy Grace. A puffy lipped obnoxious b**** spewing vile bile with no style, Your words were more useless than the Anthony murder trial.
This dizzy guy is gonna rue the day that I decided to battle em. Hes jibber jabberin weak attacks while Im batterin em You shouldnt oppose an ExTha, youll meet no MC as a bad as one. wholl leak your blood like some Johansson photo data, son.
You cant catch me homie, so I implore you to end your pursuit. Just murdered you so I could brag about it, call me ExTha Van Der Sloot.
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v712/ExTha/10and14.jpg "What about the lion from Lion King?" - SuperNiceDog
ExThaNemesis posted... Yo dizz, youre not a pro dancer, youre a liar and a disgrace. I just saw you on Dancing With the Stars under your alias: Nancy Grace.
I don't know jdizzy, you're gonna have to think real hard to come up with an insult worse than Nancy Grace.
This t**** hoe don't even know his ends beginning Check twitter for #exthaslosing you'll notice that's its trending A milli hits a day and still don't compare to my punch lines lethal interjections to ya brain cause you to flatline
EX out Tha n**** that thinks that he compares to me My NEMISIS? Please you lookin more like Claire to me
Mutalate ya body redfields where I have you layin The lack of brains in ya lines make me think of zombie slayin
My raps get the board hype call me R.E.6 Nothing you say excites. Flaccid dick I got that verbal Viagra lyrics have yo girl cummin if I'm nancy guess you emmett smith b**** start runnin
From: jdizzy156 | #018 My raps get the board hype call me R.E.6 Nothing you say excites. Flaccid dick I got that verbal Viagra lyrics have yo girl cummin if I'm nancy guess you emmett smith b**** start runnin
gottem
extha has to come out swinging hard to get my vote
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Nemesis is relentless, chasing you down to halt your invalid lines. My Resident Evil deeds got you under control, Miss Valentine. Now youre mine! So end whatever thoughts you had of killing me. Id arm myself to tentacle rape you, but you seem the type to take it willingly.
Lyrically youre unimpressive, leaving me with a mess of hollow disses. So Im here to strip you bare and violate you like Licker kisses. So trust when I say a one on one with me aint what you want, j. Even That Dog cant save you from me, Im straight up El Gigante. Im Burton-esque, even your girl knows that Im a f***in stud. Before they find you theyll say I hope this is not dizzys blood.
Theres proof yall, Im the main event and he dont even start to thrill. Jdizzy is a f***in no-name, gimme some real STARS to kill.
themed raps are harder than I thought.
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v712/ExTha/10and14.jpg "What about the lion from Lion King?" - SuperNiceDog
Um wow this is pretty close. I thought Jdizzy's first verse was by far the worst in the battle. But I thought his second was the best by a hair. Extha's were decent, but not up to his usual par, some good multis the content wasn't mindblowing, and the flow seemed a little off at times. Fortunatley the flow didn't hurt Extha in my eyes, because it wasn't any different for Dizzy.
Also what's the deal with ending a sentence and then putting a random word at the end of the line? j did it twice here and MP3 did it twice as well. It looks really awkward and I think it totally disrupts the flow.
It's pretty common in rap battles, but it translates poorly when typed out, and it needs to be done consistently throughout the rap to make it flow. It usually indicates a pause before the word, and to keep the flow you need multiple pauses.
Check it out starting from 11:30, he does it quite well imo.
From: Ed Bellis | #032 Also what's the deal with ending a sentence and then putting a random word at the end of the line? j did it twice here and MP3 did it twice as well. It looks really awkward and I think it totally disrupts the flow.
It's a clever way to make a simile with one less syllable (ie: you don't have to use like or as)
For example (to explain my SUPER CLEVER rap): Too slow to get my flow; getting lost (like) Jack (from lost). Don't mess with me I'm on the number one (like a) big mac (a "number one" at mcdonalds is a big mac, which has "special sauce" on it)
or as Drake says in "Forever" Swimming in the water come and find me (like) Nemo.
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