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KrayzieBonezz 12/28/19 10:01:30 PM #1:	With what's already drawn, please assist me to improve with helpful criticism por favor. I went over a few Jim Lee drawings for reference. Was undoubtedly lazy for not drawing most of the body. --- R.I.P Chris, Daniel, Nancy Benoit https://youtu.be/yOL02oq2rj8 <cite>KrayzieBonezz posted [p:932177783] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>With what's already drawn, please assist me to improve with helpful criticism por favor. I went over a few Jim Lee drawings for reference. Was undoubtedly lazy for not drawing most of the body. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Gakk86 12/28/19 10:02:23 PM #2:	Needs bat nipples. You did great on the face, though. --- All generalizations are false, including this one. <cite>Gakk86 posted [p:932177809] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>Needs bat nipples. You did great on the face, though. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
KrayzieBonezz 12/28/19 10:07:01 PM #4:	nipple --- R.I.P Chris, Daniel, Nancy Benoit https://youtu.be/yOL02oq2rj8 <cite>KrayzieBonezz posted [p:932178000] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote> nipple </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
FF_Redux 12/28/19 10:07:37 PM #5:	He has no pupils or iris, l2draweyes --- https://imgur.com/hRsG4 https://i.imgtc.com/zZQ38Hb.jpg https://imgur.com/Z4cir https://imgur.com/qEyGS https://imgur.com/37KDT <cite>FF_Redux posted [p:932178021] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>He has no pupils or iris, l2draweyes </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Mistere Man 12/28/19 10:11:06 PM #6:	FF_Redux posted... He has no pupils or iris, l2draweyes They are often drawn with white eyes like that. --- Water+Fall=Radiation. <cite>Mistere Man posted [p:932178150] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>FF_Redux posted... </cite> <quote>He has no pupils or iris, l2draweyes</quote>They are often drawn with white eyes like that. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
dib153 12/28/19 10:12:44 PM #7:	Honestly, more torso would do you justice Stop being lazy --- "Dib is my new hero. Epic insult man, epic to the max" ~ Drakona <cite>dib153 posted [p:932178195] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>Honestly, more torso would do you justice Stop being lazy </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
viewmaster_pi 12/28/19 10:13:48 PM #8:	tbh his pecs seem a little high --- - Sent from my DynaTAC 8000X <cite>viewmaster_pi posted [p:932178231] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>tbh his pecs seem a little high </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Mistere Man 12/28/19 10:14:05 PM #9:	KrayzieBonezz posted... nipple Should have been one square over> https://images.app.goo.gl/QeZPX3Y3kVvoXxbY6 --- Water+Fall=Radiation. <cite>Mistere Man posted [p:932178241] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>KrayzieBonezz posted... </cite> <quote> nipple</quote>Should have been one square over> https://images.app.goo.gl/QeZPX3Y3kVvoXxbY6 </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
RchHomieQuanChi 12/28/19 10:14:56 PM #10:	All jokes aside, it's pretty good TC. You definitely nailed the face. --- I have nothing else to say <cite>RchHomieQuanChi posted [p:932178276] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>All jokes aside, it's pretty good TC. You definitely nailed the face. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
KrayzieBonezz 12/28/19 10:15:44 PM #11:	Yeah I also prefer the white eyes but for the sake of an attempt Also fixed the nipple and I will re attempt the full body. I hate hands but its just more practice. --- R.I.P Chris, Daniel, Nancy Benoit https://youtu.be/yOL02oq2rj8 <cite>KrayzieBonezz posted [p:932178296] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>Yeah I also prefer the white eyes but for the sake of an attempt Also fixed the nipple and I will re attempt the full body. I hate hands but its just more practice. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Alteres 12/28/19 10:25:51 PM #12:	Nice job. Much better with white eyes though. --- ........the ghost in the machine... IGN: Fox, FC: 5344-2646-0982 <cite>Alteres posted [p:932178630] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>Nice job. Much better with white eyes though. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
cjsdowg 12/28/19 10:30:05 PM #13:	I can't think of anything I would point and say fix that. But since you asked. Maybe the logo is a bit off. But I don't know I am looking hard for bad stuff and can't find much. --- Bender: Well, everybody, I just saved a turtle. What have you done with your lives? <cite>cjsdowg posted [p:932178779] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>I can't think of anything I would point and say fix that. But since you asked. Maybe the logo is a bit off. But I don't know I am looking hard for bad stuff and can't find much. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Vol2tex 12/28/19 10:40:29 PM #14:	A Jim Lee fan! The only issues that stand out are the right side of the body (our left) looks a bit wide, and the eyes can line up slightly better. --- https://imgur.com/KqTAosO https://imgur.com/gxNoM3U <cite>Vol2tex posted [p:932179111] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>A Jim Lee fan! The only issues that stand out are the right side of the body (our left) looks a bit wide, and the eyes can line up slightly better. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Mistere Man 12/28/19 10:58:08 PM #15:	KrayzieBonezz posted... Yeah I also prefer the white eyes but for the sake of an attempt Also fixed the nipple and I will re attempt the full body. I hate hands but its just more practice. Looks great! I personally liked it a bit better with the white eyes, but still it looks great. --- Water+Fall=Radiation. <cite>Mistere Man posted [p:932179756] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>KrayzieBonezz posted... </cite> <quote>Yeah I also prefer the white eyes but for the sake of an attempt Also fixed the nipple and I will re attempt the full body. I hate hands but its just more practice.</quote>Looks great! I personally liked it a bit better with the white eyes, but still it looks great. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
The Popo 12/28/19 11:06:26 PM #16:	Thats impressive Agreed with the comments about the white eyes looking better --- Live action Hungry Hungry Hippos though, now that was a sport. ~Aeon Azuran <cite>The Popo posted [p:932180108] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>Thats impressive Agreed with the comments about the white eyes looking better </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
KrayzieBonezz 12/28/19 11:08:01 PM #17:	Minus the nipple and the pupils because c'mon. I shortened the length of the shoulder touched up his chest symbol a little bit and touched on the eyes as well. Not sure if I made a difference on the eyes though. Also added a bit more shadow to the cape --- R.I.P Chris, Daniel, Nancy Benoit https://youtu.be/yOL02oq2rj8 <cite>KrayzieBonezz posted [p:932180174] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>Minus the nipple and the pupils because c'mon. I shortened the length of the shoulder touched up his chest symbol a little bit and touched on the eyes as well. Not sure if I made a difference on the eyes though. Also added a bit more shadow to the cape </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Mistere Man 12/28/19 11:11:10 PM #18:	Without nipples what will Batman do to keep themselves entertained? --- Water+Fall=Radiation. <cite>Mistere Man posted [p:932180299] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>Without nipples what will Batman do to keep themselves entertained? </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Guide 12/28/19 11:12:51 PM #19:	As a sketch, it's solid. Like, Maybe just clean it up on better paper, you'd have a good cover. --- formerly evening formerly guide https://youtu.be/Acn5IptKWQU <cite>Guide posted [p:932180372] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>As a sketch, it's solid. Like, Maybe just clean it up on better paper, you'd have a good cover. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
KrayzieBonezz 12/28/19 11:18:08 PM #20:	Guide posted... As a sketch, it's solid. Like, Maybe just clean it up on better paper, you'd have a good cover. Clean it up. Computer paper or sketch paper. Maybe have the trinity standing at a gravestone. Ink it. Paint it. Have my own cover for JLA or something? I like it. --- R.I.P Chris, Daniel, Nancy Benoit https://youtu.be/yOL02oq2rj8 <cite>KrayzieBonezz posted [p:932180552] in Help me im... [t:78289370]...</cite> <quote>Guide posted... </cite> <quote>As a sketch, it's solid. Like, Maybe just clean it up on better paper, you'd have a good cover.</quote>Clean it up. Computer paper or sketch paper. Maybe have the trinity standing at a gravestone. Ink it. Paint it. Have my own cover for JLA or something? I like it. </quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
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