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Topic"I consciously add as much diversity as I can to my writing"
UnfairRepresent
03/25/24 11:19:04 AM
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gikos posted...
no they don't they tell you that after you keep pestering them about their past
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You literally say "Mizhena? That's an unusual name. I don't think I've heard it before."

To which they say:

"When I was born, my parents thought me a boy and raised me as such. In time, we all came to understand I was truly a woman. I created my new name from syllables of different languages. All have special meaning to me, it is the truest reflection of who I am."

And your literal only response is "Thank you for sharing your story with me."

It's bad writing in a series known for it's good writing, characters and dialogue choice. You know this, hence why you're lying about it.

"Let's just insert some diversity we don't actually care about/have ideas for" has this risk of being half baked.

Compare that dialogue to Bill from the Last of Us, a game not even known for it's writing and see the difference and obvious passion from the creators in the latter.

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