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Topic | just started house in fata morgana (ongoing spoilers) |
plasmabeam 06/14/22 8:09:41 AM #10: | masterplum posted... Its good. Basically my feelings as well. It's unique, but there are some major pacing issues on the back end. My biggest non-spoiler complaint is the overabundance of "..." lines of dialogue. There are certain sections of the story where "..." is every other line, and I must've tapped the X button a few thousand more times than I needed to. --- ~Jacksonville Jaguars~ ... Copied to Clipboard! |
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