LogFAQs > #946609748

Sounds a little 'busy' to me personally.

The hardest part about piano is that it can do everything, and it doesn't need to. It has to play with whatever is with it. No bass guitar? Play the bass notes. No horn section? Play the horn section's parts. No drums? Play more rhythmically.

I'd try seeing if you can sustain some chords in the right hand if you want to keep the moving bass or add some more half/whole notes in the bass line. Without drums, I think it would work as written, but with the beat driving, I don't think you need all of the movement.