Actually, there's one really minor thing. The comma in
These are also Chester, just from different universes.
Should actually be a period or semi-colon. Though semi-colons don't work in advertisements because they look elitist.
If you're tired of editing it or posted it already, no one's gonna actually notice it. Comma rules are complicated.
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