I would have to say that there are too many pictures/captions. Especially when I just read the first part, I was thinking "Why is there a picture every six words I read?"
Also, the quality of some of the captions is a bit lacking. Some of them are really good, but I feel the article is bogged down by too many of them.
That said, I really enjoyed your writing, and I hope you get another article on the site in the near future!
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Don't worry, Bill Murray!
Its things like this that make you wonder why the company that makes M&Ms don't make butter