I liked the words of the rhymes better, not necessarily the frequencies of the rhymes. Your rhymes felt more elementary, if that makes sense. Not in the sense of the style of the rhyme, just with the words that rhymed.
And yeah, I like spits that have more consistent natural accents, but audio raps are cool when they change the natural accent of a word around to make it flow better.
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~Peaf~
"Later that day, I f***ed a panda." - PSO