snailien posted...
Start taking off random pieces of clothing every once in a while and never explain it.
yes this. Just wear extra layers.
And instead of 'should play for the heat' expand to say 'should play basketball for the heat'.
Yeah its obvious, but it still helps the delivery imo.
Really the jokes seem good and if you deliver them awesomely then they can move into 'very good' status.
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