Humorously bad dialogue?
Are you trying to say translators should do that?
Nope. But given the results on the two attempts I'll take the first over the second.
FFT PSP made plenty of sense, as far as its dialogue was concerned. Dunno how you'd have a harder time following it than the original.
Most of the original translation made sense and was easy to follow. Awkward at times, but usually not difficult to understand. I guess the same is true for the PSP translation, but there's a fair amount of straight up grammatically incorrect stuff, and loads unnecessary flower to everything.
If you were more into FFT's story for the silly translation, though, I guess I can understand that!
whenever I play the game these days I usually skip through the dialogue as fast as it'll let me, so I guess it actually doesn't matter. but yeah I appreciate how silly the original is