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BlinkyGoldfish posted...

Big comedy fan here, and just watched the video TC.

Your writing isnt badbut heres a few things.

#1 thing that bugs me is the clicking sound you make constantly throughout the video. Its a sign of nervousness, almost like a tick. You gotta cut that out. Like ASAP.

You definitely do need to project more confidence in general. The content and the writing/material isnt bad at all. Your execution needs work though. Too many filler words and too much downtime.

That being said, great job! I go to a lot of local comedy shows here in my town and youd do well at the shows I go to. Ive always been interested in trying it sometime. I love writing material, but Ive never had the balls to go up and perform.

Thanks for the input. I'm aware of the mouth smacking but honestly it usually doesn't pick up so well on video so I forget. I'm gonna have to be really conscious to get rid of it, but I've had several ticks I've worked through by focusing really hard on it.