I give it to Bballman, because when I read it I could actually make a flow that was steady. While reading frostbytes I couldn't read it with a steady flow. Then again, I have no context for how he wrote it and how to spit it, so it's not really a good judgement. You guys should both record these and see how they sound.
you should really chill on pushing your opinion on what you think people should or shouldn't do, repetition isn't a magical spell that will make people regard your opinion differently, maybe we find more entertainment/enjoyment in writing/reading creative lyrics and punchlines or messing with rhyme schemes in a loose manner or writing in a way that could be flowed in multiple ways, maybe we just prefer writing, you're like the guy who b****es the whole time during an activity because it isn't being done the way you want to do it
your lyrics are still terrible, and you're still racist bro
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'I can do an eight ball in a sniff...
some call it a problem but I call it a gift'