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Would love some feedback

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https://caughtinflagrante.bandcamp.com/album/strange-days-stranger-nights?fbclid=IwAR2zYHHdwfQrTHuDENA3-EWHS34bZ5ULWjIkBlfaVusx6rmDlK-c36TALeE

Nice project that you are making for yourself.

As for feedback?

More bass. :D

i think it needs more bass too like more subbass

Ahh. I'll try and get the bass more prominent in the mix with my next stuff. I dont have the proper speakers here to do a great mix and with my subwoofer the bass sounded pretty good.
Appreciate the feedback

Listen to the first track.

Lots of good ideas, but it doesn't really build on or layer any of them. Just moves from one section to the next. Almost like the track gets bored with itself very quickly.

ai123 posted...

Listen to the first track.

Lots of good ideas, but it doesn't really build on or layer any of them. Just moves from one section to the next. Almost like the track gets bored with itself very quickly.

Eh. That's fair I guess. I think the first track is the weakest though.
This is my first foray into electronic stuff in some years so maybe a bit rusty.
Wanted it to end on something a bit different from the others

Bump

Strange Days/Stranger Nights:

I don't really think the percussion track goes with the rest of the song. It starts out thinking like it's gonna be some drum & bass and then suddenly it's trance. There's also some segments where the instruments randomly rest for long periods that's weird. It's like you built this piece to go with a vocal track that isn't there.

Don't get caught:
This one's a bit better. There's nothing bad about this song but there's nothing to really hook you either. It's like fast paced elevator music.

Subcutaneous mystery:
This is the best one. Try and figure out what you did here and do more of it. This is track I could see being played at clubs.

City Hunter:
Seems like mostly chill and the percussion clashes with it. Either fully commit to that ambience and do away with the drums or crank up the bass and make the rest of it a little more punchy.

Tyranthraxus posted...

Strange Days/Stranger Nights:

I don't really think the percussion track goes with the rest of the song. It starts out thinking like it's gonna be some drum & bass and then suddenly it's trance. There's also some segments where the instruments randomly rest for long periods that's weird. It's like you built this piece to go with a vocal track that isn't there.

Don't get caught:
This one's a bit better. There's nothing bad about this song but there's nothing to really hook you either. It's like fast paced elevator music.

Subcutaneous mystery:
This is the best one. Try and figure out what you did here and do more of it. This is track I could see being played at clubs.

City Hunter:
Seems like mostly chill and the percussion clashes with it. Either fully commit to that ambience and do away with the drums or crank up the bass and make the rest of it a little more punchy.

Thanks for the detailed review.
I'll keep those in mind when I make some new stuff