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nativeboi85 09/24/22 12:31:18 PM #1: |
https://youtu.be/H4-gbqMe0zY Is one of my first videos, any pointers would be greatly appreciated! --- A channel for real horror https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClAhxgsRblmpNiKwj3DadcA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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nativeboi85 09/24/22 1:44:05 PM #2: |
Bump --- A channel for real horror https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClAhxgsRblmpNiKwj3DadcA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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trappedunderice 09/24/22 2:11:00 PM #3: |
Already better than that one guy with the annoying voice, chills I think the channel is called. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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nativeboi85 09/24/22 2:22:47 PM #4: |
trappedunderice posted... Already better than that one guy with the annoying voice, chills I think the channel is called.Oh yea i heard of him lmao --- A channel for real horror https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClAhxgsRblmpNiKwj3DadcA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Kitt 09/24/22 2:30:09 PM #5: |
It's pretty cool to see someone doing fun little projects like this. Good luck, TC. --- I'm a little teapot blowing off steam. https://m.imgur.com/pmc9XsI https://m.imgur.com/hfzvdPe ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Xethuminra 09/24/22 2:31:03 PM #6: |
Seems to be missing something, no? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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itachi15243 09/24/22 2:37:33 PM #7: |
You're the same guy as last time right? You've made some huge improvements. I'm proud. I'd say from here, work on your narrative elements. Your type of speech and the words you use to tell the story, along with pacing and such will be important moving forward. --- I do drawings and stuff https://www.fiverr.com/blueblitz ... Copied to Clipboard!
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nativeboi85 09/24/22 2:38:55 PM #8: |
itachi15243 posted... You're the same guy as last time right? You've made some huge improvements. I'm proud.Thank you i am i appreciate that i been taking feedback seriously --- A channel for real horror https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClAhxgsRblmpNiKwj3DadcA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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nativeboi85 09/24/22 2:39:09 PM #9: |
Xethuminra posted... Seems to be missing something, no?What exactly anything helps --- A channel for real horror https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClAhxgsRblmpNiKwj3DadcA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Xethuminra 09/24/22 2:40:13 PM #10: |
What if you had a video of the monster and faded it out to like 5% and layered it on top of the overhead shot of the car? So like you can barely see it and then it fades out altogether. Would that have been spooky too? ... Copied to Clipboard!
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emblem-man 09/24/22 2:40:55 PM #11: |
Kitt posted... It's pretty cool to see someone doing fun little projects like this. Good luck, TC. This. I'll be sure to give this a watch tc --- http://avatar.xboxlive.com/avatar/emblem%20boy/avatar-body.png haters gonna hate ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Xethuminra 09/24/22 2:42:29 PM #12: |
nativeboi85 posted... What exactly anything helpsIf this is what you were going for, then you succeeded and nothing is missing. I was asking you tbh ;) Too many still images? Did the story have a point? Etc Did it happen? ;) Is it worth writing about? ;) ... Copied to Clipboard!
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nativeboi85 09/24/22 2:43:16 PM #13: |
Xethuminra posted... What if you had a video of the monster and faded it out to like 5% and layered it on top of the overhead shot of the car? So like you can barely see it and then it fades out altogether. Would that have been spooky too?Thats a good idea ill try something like that --- A channel for real horror https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClAhxgsRblmpNiKwj3DadcA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Xethuminra 09/24/22 2:43:44 PM #14: |
nativeboi85 posted... Thats a good idea ill try something like thatPut more stills in the middle of your videos and animate your stills ... Copied to Clipboard!
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nativeboi85 09/24/22 2:44:05 PM #15: |
emblem-man posted... This.Thank you!! --- A channel for real horror https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClAhxgsRblmpNiKwj3DadcA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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CRON 09/24/22 2:47:18 PM #16: |
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Antbregante 09/24/22 2:50:03 PM #17: |
I got a pointer for you https://gamefaqs.gamespot.com/a/user_image/3/2/8/AANGliAADtYo.jpg ... Copied to Clipboard!
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nativeboi85 09/24/22 2:58:18 PM #18: |
CRON posted... * Streamline your thumbnails and video titles. They're a mess and excessively dropping hashtags in video titles makes your content look unprofessional and hastily-made.I appreciate those tips my voice is something i been working on but having a heavy NJ accent makes it difficult. The lisp lol --- A channel for real horror https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClAhxgsRblmpNiKwj3DadcA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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nativeboi85 09/24/22 2:58:24 PM #19: |
Antbregante posted... I got a pointer for youLmao --- A channel for real horror https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClAhxgsRblmpNiKwj3DadcA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Antbregante 09/24/22 5:08:27 PM #20: |
Okay, I have watched the video now and can give you an actual pointer instead of a picture of the dog breed. Try not run on like you do at about 15 seconds in. There was a few buts and a few ands. Try to make your sentences more concise. Other than that it was good. So many of the spooky channels go on with stories for a hour or more and I like having shorter stories every once and awhile. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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nativeboi85 09/24/22 7:26:16 PM #21: |
Antbregante posted... Okay, I have watched the video now and can give you an actual pointer instead of a picture of the dog breed. Try not run on like you do at about 15 seconds in. There was a few buts and a few ands. Try to make your sentences more concise. Other than that it was good. So many of the spooky channels go on with stories for a hour or more and I like having shorter stories every once and awhile.Thats exactly what i am looking for i am bad with buts and ands i will work on that thank you so much --- A channel for real horror https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClAhxgsRblmpNiKwj3DadcA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Norman_Smiley 09/24/22 7:31:21 PM #22: |
I can hear you breathing way too much. Either get an audio editor and remove those breaths (keep a pause) or pull a tay zonday and move away from the mic when you breathe --- http://i.imgur.com/BVBQC.jpg The big wiggle equals ratings. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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