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Kurumiee
12/14/21 3:00:50 AM
#1:


''She was the main protester of the movement, as the president still opposes the very rights she believes in''

It's just an example sentence ^^

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PrettyBoyFloyd
12/14/21 4:09:12 AM
#2:


The comma makes it sound like two different actions or statements.


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Questionmarktarius
12/14/21 4:11:02 AM
#3:


,;-.
in order of how long the pause needs to be.
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marthsheretoo
12/14/21 4:15:07 AM
#4:


I know that's an example sentence, but it's a real bad sentence FYI.

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Questionmarktarius
12/14/21 4:18:31 AM
#5:


Separate this, that, and the other with commas; then those, the other thing, and this one by a semicolon - use a dash for an aside, and end it all with a period.
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Garioshi
12/14/21 4:21:10 AM
#6:


Yes, you separate independent clauses with a comma and a conjunction.

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PrettyBoyFloyd
12/14/21 4:25:55 AM
#7:


Questionmarktarius posted...
,;-.
in order of how long the pause needs to be.

I suck at writing.

I learned to use it by saying what I'm writing and then using it if the statement of sentence has a break in it.

Still get confused when using words like "but" or ", but" though.

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Steffenfield
12/14/21 4:41:05 AM
#8:


If the clause with as comes first, a comma is generally required.
  • As the plane was taking off, Erica fell asleep. (as =while)
  • As I'm a pacifist, I'm against all wars. (as =because)
If the clause with as comes second, a comma is generally not required.
  • Jonas fell as he stepped off the curb. (as =when)
  • She stayed home as she had no car. (as =because)
However, even in a sentence in which the "as clause" comes second, a comma may be necessary to clarify the meaning.
  • She went home as it was raining. (could mean either because it was raining or while it was raining)
  • She went home, as it was raining. (clearly means because it was raining)


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berlyman101
12/14/21 4:48:37 AM
#9:


In this case I would ditch the comma and replace "as" with "because" or a semicolon if you want to be fancy. It's clearer that way.

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