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coolcono
02/08/21 1:23:58 PM
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You couldn't post this on Youtube or do it on TV.
Have a bunch of 35+ year old guys super fan the local high school volleyball team. The skit would feature a sleazy looking guy talking about the upcoming season. Various shots would be shown from practice and games. One of the group would be in a 69 jersey. They would cheer loudly from the stands. "Keep your butt down, Becky!" Make a ton of sexual references you couldn't prove.
The final shot would feature the guy saying, "We are going to have a great year this year." A slow creepy smile runs across his face.

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Lost_All_Senses
02/08/21 1:25:42 PM
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I don't like this at all. There's no context other than creepy guys being creepy. I don't see the funny.

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DoGCyN
02/08/21 1:26:11 PM
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Revision needed.

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coolcono
02/08/21 1:26:27 PM
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Lost_All_Senses posted...
I don't like this at all. There's no context other than creepy guys being creepy. I don't see the funny.
Come on, that is hilarious.

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Lost_All_Senses
02/08/21 1:34:56 PM
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coolcono posted...
Come on, that is hilarious.

That vollyball team is full of people's daughters

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lifespeedrunner
02/08/21 1:37:01 PM
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I'm calling the FBI
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RebelElite791
02/08/21 1:49:03 PM
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A) this topic seems familiar
B) what the fuck is wrong with you

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coolcono
02/08/21 1:54:01 PM
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RebelElite791 posted...
A) this topic seems familiar
B) what the fuck is wrong with you
It is so bad, it's funny.

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Ruvan22
02/08/21 2:40:44 PM
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coolcono posted...
It is so bad, it's funny.

Uhh... men sexually harassing high school girls?
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Pogo_Marimo
02/08/21 2:47:49 PM
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It's poorly written and has little adherence to grammatical rules or cohesive flow.

Wait, you wrote this? And it was meant to be funny? Yeesh.

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