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FF_Redux
12/06/21 8:20:48 AM
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https://voca.ro/104Tpi2NYYV0

beginner guitar and singing with gibberish etc

It sounds familar but I dunno to what.

still working on it

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FF_Redux
12/06/21 9:32:13 AM
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FF_Redux
12/06/21 6:29:00 PM
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SiO4
12/06/21 6:37:53 PM
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It sounds good.
Kinda sounds Mexican.
It is a good melody for sure.
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FF_Redux
12/06/21 7:19:18 PM
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SiO4 posted...
It sounds good.
Kinda sounds Mexican.
It is a good melody for sure.

Thanks, I dunno about being Mexican, I don't think the strumming is like that.

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RedLuigi
12/06/21 8:40:00 PM
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SiO4 posted...
It sounds good.
Kinda sounds Mexican.
It is a good melody for sure.

Sounds like the actual word alegre in Spanish which creates images to me happier than the word joy merry comes closer here

The chords sound really nice though, its a good progression and the melody fits incredibly well


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FF_Redux
12/07/21 5:24:46 AM
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RedLuigi posted...
Sounds like the actual word alegre in Spanish which creates images to me happier than the word joy merry comes closer here

The chords sound really nice though, its a good progression and the melody fits incredibly well

Thanks, nice to get some confirmation on that. Right now I have about 10 melodies all which can be worked on.

My process is to play around and find a chord progression and just start singing a melody that comes up in my mind and work on that, then decide if its the verse or chorus, the bridge if I want one usually I do last.

I want lyrics to my melodies and I have themes for them on what Id like them to be about but I have no talent in writing.


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Big_Nabendu
12/07/21 5:37:10 AM
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Is that em c d and g?

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FF_Redux
12/07/21 5:44:53 AM
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Big_Nabendu posted...
Is that em c d and g?

capo on 4

G, C, D, in the chorus I have Em after G. The bridge is F C G then F C D, the second bridge or whatever is called is Em C G D, Em C D.

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Big_Nabendu
12/07/21 5:51:15 AM
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Capo on 2nd, 5th, and 7th for maximum results


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neccis
12/07/21 5:53:20 AM
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SSounds awesome. Keep up the hard work.
Not going to rate it because it's not about rates, it's about what your heart feels.


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FF_Redux
12/07/21 6:34:02 AM
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neccis posted...
SSounds awesome. Keep up the hard work.
Not going to rate it because it's not about rates, it's about what your heart feels.

yeah, aint really looking for rate but for opinions.

Just played around with new chords and this melody came up. Only got the verse, which I want to change a bit cuz it sounds too familar to something.

https://voca.ro/1g4AWTMLRgqE

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FF_Redux
12/07/21 9:21:41 PM
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neccis
12/07/21 11:16:28 PM
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FF_Redux posted...
Hmm
Hmm what?

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FF_Redux
12/08/21 4:55:45 PM
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FF_Redux posted...
yeah, aint really looking for rate but for opinions.

Just played around with new chords and this melody came up. Only got the verse, which I want to change a bit cuz it sounds too familar to something.

https://voca.ro/1g4AWTMLRgqE

did a contiuniation on this

https://voca.ro/16cUj2F3B7i1

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