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| Topic | I just finished writing a pilot script and I would love to get some feedback. |
| gunplagirl 12/24/21 4:52:16 AM #8: | I charge to look over anything this long, but I did give the first two pages a quick once over. I'm not really pulled in, and the dialogue already feels a little forced. --- tfw no big tiddy goth vampire gf who lactates blood - viewmaster_pi ... Copied to Clipboard! |
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