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Topic	CE Writing topic -- This Time It Won't Purge? Edition
An_Actual_Chad 06/13/20 7:57:18 AM #380:	If anyone is up for it, can someone read this excerpt from my upcoming novel, and tell me if the protagonist, Isaac, was able to persuade his co-protagonist to his point of view too quickly? It felt like a long, heartfelt conversation while I was writing it, but upon re-reading it, maybe it's too quick for Brylena's mind to have been changed so quickly? idk. It's a little over 1800 words. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1puIi0MxLv7AyksVWZfFdEFJDEokwTUirxXeCsA7Xjtg/edit?usp=sharing A little context, for those who don't know, this is a Dryad. They're plant people, and always female. Their lives are connected to the tree that brought life to them, so when their tree dies, so do they. I didn't make them up. They have appeared in fantasy stories long before any modern stories. There's a lot of context missing in this excerpt about how Isaac and Brylena (the Dryad) met, and what Isaac is doing in the forest in the first place, but I don't feel it's necessary to know that stuff in order to understand the important bits of this excerpt. Anyway, if anyone is willing to take a look, I'll be happy to do the same for you! --- Being a Chad is a choice. <cite>An_Actual_Chad posted [p:940603870] in CE Writing... [t:78309887]...</cite> <quote>If anyone is up for it, can someone read this excerpt from my upcoming novel, and tell me if the protagonist, Isaac, was able to persuade his co-protagonist to his point of view too quickly? It felt like a long, heartfelt conversation while I was writing it, but upon re-reading it, maybe it's too quick for Brylena's mind to have been changed so quickly? idk. It's a little over 1800 words. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1puIi0MxLv7AyksVWZfFdEFJDEokwTUirxXeCsA7Xjtg/edit?usp=sharing A little context, for those who don't know, this is a Dryad. They're plant people, and always female. Their lives are connected to the tree that brought life to them, so when their tree dies, so do they. I didn't make them up. They have appeared in fantasy stories long before any modern stories. There's a lot of context missing in this excerpt about how Isaac and Brylena (the Dryad) met, and what Isaac is doing in the forest in the first place, but I don't feel it's necessary to know that stuff in order to understand the important bits of this excerpt. Anyway, if anyone is willing to take a look, I'll be happy to do the same for you! --- Being a Chad is a choice.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
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