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that's outstanding. the pinnacle of "has a thesaurus" writing. the second paragraph is just a collection of sentence fragments

ChaosTonyV4 posted...

We are not ''incel''. We are the next evolution of inceldom and mankind in general, we are the solution to society's ills, we represent the next paradigm shift in thinking, we are the truly enlightened. We are none of those cookie cutter right-wing, left-wing, centrist ideologies. We are beyond such childish concepts.

To be Darkcel# is to know that there is no light in the Tunnel of Life; there is only darkness. As Darkcels, we tame the darkness# and forge our own destiny among the endless nothingness. We create a future as architects of destiny itself.
Darkcels# are born from that darkness at its worst. The darkness was not kind to us, but we do not sorrow or complain about the past, because our suffering IS what turned us into the transcendent beings that we are today. We once sought out things like love and relationships, but moids have traumatized us because we could never have what we desired. However, this trauma saved us in the end; we no longer care about moids as we know how much of a lost cause moids are. Above all, our disconnection from such primal urges is the source of our enlightenment. It helped us see beyond the ordinary and we ascended beyond the limits of ''Thinking'' and ''Rationality'' itself. We serve a higher purpose that transcends the ordinary mind, of ordinary thinking, or, as we like to call it, the ''Old thinking''. We are the ''New thinking''.

I was going to do the paragraph after but holy shit it was exhausting. Who writes a fucking manifesto like this? Hire a proofreader!

wow it gets even more nonsensical as it goes on. I bet the writer read, or at least tried to read a fair bit of Heinlein when he was younger and gravitated to the Sad Puppies faction of scifi/fantasy. This is amazingly self-absorbed, a diatribe that seems to aspire to be the speech a mediocre villain spouts immediately before being gunned down by his own henchmen. It spends a lot of time saying absolutely nothing, which only works at all if it's well-written and enthralling, which this assuredly is not. It breaks down into name-calling, cliche and even edgier nonsense, blaming everything to humanity itself for... whatever ill-defined ills they're facing. Speaking of ill-defined, it uses plenty of terms that it doesn't specify at all. What the hell are "moids"?? Context gives a vague understanding, but it could be as general as meaning everybody except a Darkcel. The rant said it itself; it's "superficial", a farcical manifesto penned by the dregs of society who, despite spending most of their time apparently reading, can't write for shit.

10/10 would be indoctrinated into writing a wholly unneeded critical review again
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