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In brighter news, I'm done with my first and major revision of "Elysium Shining."

"Only," "just," and "enough" are cut back to a reasonable degree; with the second one being reduced to characters' speech, and words such as "adjust" and "justice." The story details and other details have been ironed out for consistency. The format looks nice and clean on my main document and Google Doc, whereas I have the last quarter of chapters copied to another doc with html code so I can continue to test the story with that one site's audience. Said audience is growing steadily in regards to people there making it a "favorite" of theirs.

Note: That site will not see all of the tweaks and changes before a certain point.

Once I had completed the revised draft last night the word count--discounting the title page, chapter headers, and scene breaks--is in the ballpark of 177.8k words instead of the 166.7k of the first draft. Yay for fixing little errors, such as typos or missed words I'd meant to include originally, and adding a few descriptions of places or things, toward the beginning.
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