Oh hey guys just to remind you, though I should have done this earlier, you're technically supposed to bold your votes for them to count and whatnot.
Achromatic posted...
Oh hey these are better written than they were before.
...I thought the original drafts were well-written in and of themselves, but I do feel the new versions are better polished.
The originals were marred with tense changes for one, as well as some weird language where it felt in retrospect like Snake briefly broke character, and one or two exchanges that were kind of funny but also somewhat thematically inappropriate
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The Legend of Snake: http://tinyurl.com/3cal86z
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