Entry 3
I'm about to complain about something only someone who has a lot of knowledge with RPGs would point out. In MMOs you resurrect at a graveyard, in other RPGs you return to a save point. I guess it could be like demon souls or something like that, but everything in the story from the team name cliche, FF references, etc screams generic JRPG.
I do feel like the entire thing is more or less a very long rant without any real content. 90% of it is vlad complaining about the heroes and how stupid they are, while at the end he just wants to kill things. Also, if he's burning dying flesh, I'm not really sure how that's working out. If they were all dead they'd be sent back to the graveyard.
There is very little wrong I can point out technically, but I just found it kind of boring and one dimensional. If I didn't have experience with RPGs this story would be completely lost on me. I'd consider that a little too niche an audience.
Entry 4 is going to take me a while to get the write up for, so It'll be up tomorrow.
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Chrono1219